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The sketch thread!

Strawberry You're probably one of my biggest inspirations! I've seen you work soooooooooooo hard to get to where you are. :) You alone make me want to push myself as hard as possible. So you don't ever give up. Seriously. You're doing great.
 
Here are some random faces I doodled recently. Still trying to get the hang of things. O_oa

Faces.png
 

Star

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Mouth or nose isn't lined up on the first picture.

:D

Bottom one would have been perfect if mouth was a little higher and closer to the nose.

I feel like Daxis now.


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sum im daxis
saxis would be a palindrome that sounds exactly like sexist


it feels like the chick on the right is smaller. Not necessarily shorter, which she most likely is, but in general smaller. two chicks are pretty much different, but their style varied a bit.
wow the left girl's tits are perky as hell. o.0. like, fuck they look as firm as implants. anyways, i might say something about the angle of the tit's tats, but i'm just looking them over and they might be right. who knows.
left girl hand could be done better- proportions, angling them right, just some misc stuff. sorta the same to the right hand.
left girl's left eye could use some changing, but for the most part it's good. actually scratch that im just forcibly nitpicking.

right girl's tits and chest area needs to be done over. the bandage or whatever it is you call the thing wrapping her lower abdomen seems to kill it, and the way you sort of tried to imply breasts is not done as well as it could.

beyond that, really no problems. fuck there weren't any problems in the first place i was just nitpicking around cause im bored.


too bad i can't criticize myself cause i eventually give up after 15 minutes.
 
StrawberryFlower":3jq9mscb said:
Here are some random faces I doodled recently. Still trying to get the hang of things. O_oa

Faces.png

bottom pic looks like you tried to draw the neck right next to the hair. just saying, but if you did try to do that then it's totally wrong and necks wouldn't be that small, unless of stylization. if you didn't try to do this and it just looks like it, better luck next time
and the shadow under her left eyebrow is a bit deep and looks like she forgot eye shadower/liner/whatever you call it on her right eyes\

first pic, the hair that's falling down from her right is sorta ridiculous by itself

woot woot daxis critix OUT
 

Star

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Daxis":3lwm6aqf said:
but their style varied a bit.

Thank god. I was trying to do that. I kept hearing from Strawberry on how my girls faces always look the same. As I was looking over somethings I could of definitely done a lot of things better, I wish I hadn't rushed it, even though I took like two hours. Maybe three would have been better.
Girl on right is shorter and younger, shoulda moved her down on paint for scale purposes. Boobs are A cups too. As for the implants on the other chick, dayum, I guess I got it right, she's supposed to be a kinda of slut anyway.

Thanks for the crixis daxis. I'll be sure to fix dem
 
style varied in eyebrows, and the eye size, and a bit within the thickness of facelines (as so called style for anime focuses mainly on faces). the shoulders also look a bit more curvy.

seeing as the girl on the right has a cups, there's no real need to draw the tit- i noticed you actually marked them out with a lighter color circlish shape right by the arm. which is why it looks more obvious. nah, just not do anything, no need to empahsize how small the breasts are.

big heads, although i'm quite sure you're going for the big haired anime, so meh

and the girl on the left looks too wise/nice/caring to be a slut XD
 

Ares

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I haven't drawn in ages, but I read this thread and I wanted to give it a shot (i was never really good :P)
Doodle_1.png
Doodle_2.png
(I messed up his left hand :x)

I must say, there are really a lot of good artists here :O
 
i just doodled this for the sake of contributing something to this thread, i started out with the goat thing in the leftest top, and drew my way around the pic, and then revisited the left top, with the shouting dude

doodle.png
 

Star

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Moxie":1rgzbvx8 said:
nice to see some more folks posting sketches!

some quick sillydoodles:
sk1.jpg
I love how your characters have a lot of character. The healer is quite cute and I like what you did with their knee caps. The Fat guy reminds me of an Australian golfer or something. The guy with the cig is trying to act all cool. What kind of weapon is the healer have?
 

moxie

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even though i'm a butt and i take potshots at anime all the time

that is a BIG BIG BIG improvement over that last character cg you posted (the chick from your game, don't remember the name) and whatever you've been practicing has been working for you

there's still some problems, particularly on the right (her right) side like the shoulder and the knee, and also the legs in kind of wonky directions, but wow i wish i could improve as rapidly as you did
 

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