The sketch thread!

[Jek]

She looks pretty. I like the mouth and eyes.

 

[moxie]

I like to see you experimenting with different styles, strawberry

keep it up!

 

[moxie]

trying to get back in the habit of sketching regularly

I say this like EVERY TIME but if I don't start, what little doodlin skills I have will shrivel up and fall out of my brain!

 

[StrawberrySmiles]

Very awesome, Moe! You're sooooo gooooooood! Seriously! XD

I envy you. T.T

My friend wants me to do a strange mix of western comic book style and anime for our story - and now I'm doomed/scurred.

Edit:
Here are some of my recent sketches. I know my arms/hands suck. :P I'm trying!

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[Dr. Funk]

This one's a little bit on the brutal side...

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I messed up the left hand D:

 

[StrawberrySmiles]

Nice, Dr. Funk! I like your hands. I for one, cannot draw hands for the life of me! :/

Here's another drawing from me. O_oa I know - I fail at bodies.

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[Daxis]

Nice, Dr. Funk! I like your hands. I for one, cannot draw hands for the life of me! :/

Here's another drawing from me. O_oa I know - I fail at bodies.

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the two different girls have somehwat different proportions and all, which are really emphasized by how they stand together. by themselves, i guess it could have been called style. hips too low, tits too high, and the girl to the right, despite being slightly taller, looks younger, prolly cause of the larger/rounder head, more animeish eyes, and the less defined lips

lower part of girl on the right, where it's hidden, is a bit too large, and the two arms of that girl in general are not the same length (based on where the elbows were shown)

neck-shadow part of the girl in the left is ehhh-
the collarbone part is off- too much near the shoulders, etc
left (our left) boob is slightly larger
arms might be a tad elongated and a bit not perfect, don't quote me on that
the hip/thigh part thing, where the \ / part of her bend at the genitals, right below the belly button? i don't think it should be that long, or that it's a tad off. might be wrong, strip in the mirror and see <.< >.>

for the previous sketches- the first girl reminds me of a lawyer for some reason (that just got off a porn set like all your girls lol), and the stylization with the shadows, while imperfect here and there, is sorta cool
second girl, meh not so sure, forehead might be a bit high, and hands look swollen slightly

^^

 

[Daxis]

hahahah and jewel ariana
no offense but their names sound a tad pornish too haha

 

[dadevvtsvre]

i felt like drawing some trolls. so i did!! wow

now with magical disappearing hands!

 

[StrawberrySmiles]

Nice, Dr. Funk! I like your hands. I for one, cannot draw hands for the life of me! :/

Here's another drawing from me. O_oa I know - I fail at bodies.

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the two different girls have somehwat different proportions and all, which are really emphasized by how they stand together. by themselves, i guess it could have been called style. hips too low, tits too high, and the girl to the right, despite being slightly taller, looks younger, prolly cause of the larger/rounder head, more animeish eyes, and the less defined lips

lower part of girl on the right, where it's hidden, is a bit too large, and the two arms of that girl in general are not the same length (based on where the elbows were shown)

neck-shadow part of the girl in the left is ehhh-
the collarbone part is off- too much near the shoulders, etc
left (our left) boob is slightly larger
arms might be a tad elongated and a bit not perfect, don't quote me on that
the hip/thigh part thing, where the \ / part of her bend at the genitals, right below the belly button? i don't think it should be that long, or that it's a tad off. might be wrong, strip in the mirror and see <.< >.>

for the previous sketches- the first girl reminds me of a lawyer for some reason (that just got off a porn set like all your girls lol), and the stylization with the shadows, while imperfect here and there, is sorta cool
second girl, meh not so sure, forehead might be a bit high, and hands look swollen slightly

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The girl on the right is younger. O_oa She's supposed to be 14. Jewel on the left is 17. XD I would never look at myself naked or in a mirror with my glasses on. XD

Could you share why all my chicks look like porn stars as they're all under-aged? Also I didn't make up Jewel's name - my best friend did.

 

[Daxis]

no offense but
no offense

I've gotta admit... gives her kind of a "i just stepped off the set of a porno" look :x

All of Strawberries chicks she draws always look like they just stepped out of a porno. Why do you think I draw so much H of them xD

/cheap evidence

hahaha i was halfway joking, although the girl that the statements applies to the first girl in your previous previous post, with the lawyer-looking chick with jewel below her. the lawyer chick looks professional yet airs a pretty large sense of sexuality, probably with the firm-looking breasts (maybe cause of the shading stylizationg), short as hell skirt (which, now that i'm reexamining it, might make the legs a tad long http://www.segrelles.com/lessons/vseg_truco2_ima5.gif), and maybe facial expression. the girl beneath lawyer girl has a bit of it too, i blame it on clothes this time (and messy hair maybe)

and the two jewel arianas shown are of her at a younger and older age, right? there's not much to distinguish that; i thought they were two different characters at first. however, being able to make character age sets and have enough similarities is a question of skill (and a bit of thought and design), so it's not exactly a grading criterion atm

 

[StrawberrySmiles]

No they're two different girls. They are all in the same story.

The lawyer chick is actually a 17 year old science nerd named Illenia who WAS possessed by a succubus until Star said NO WAY. XD

Jewel is my best friend's character, so I can't help much there. I can't even change her name even if I wanted to. :/

The younger chick is Illenia's little sister, Nelly.

 

[Daxis]

The girl on the right is younger. O_oa She's supposed to be 14. Jewel on the left is 17.

o.0
this is to the latest pic right?

then what about the previous pic with the jewel ariana?

17 year old science nerd named Illenia who WAS possessed by a succubus

umm
lol

 

[StrawberrySmiles]

All of the same ages apply. Jewel = 17 Illenia = 17 Nelly = 14

I don't draw them differently unless I'm drawing them in their past. XD

I'm changing everything about them - especially their personalities. I can't change Jewel though. :/ I might even post it here, since my friend and I need a lot of help - if you couldn't tell.

Also:

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17 year old science nerd named Illenia who WAS possessed by a succubus

umm
lol

I love succubi, by the way. :3

 

[Star]

if you think all her chicks are porn stars you should see mine. They all look like they belong on hentai dot com. But you are right. Strawberry does like her chicks hawt so its natural she's gonna emphasize the curves giant bewbs and vagina lines.

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Also I agree with all your critique. I'll be hard but I'm sure we can teach her proportion.

Lol @ Jewel the pornstar name

 

[Makasu]

Not anywhere near done. :/
Been drawing like crazy as of late. Thats what a good heartbreak will do to you I suppose. I decided I wasn't happy with my artistic skills and therefore I'm setting out to improve them vastly.

Lots of really nice improvements though! Its very inspiring.

 

[moog]

dammmmmmmmn makasu thats really really nice man.

 

[Makasu]

@Moog: Thanks man. :D


PROGRESS!!!

 

[moxie]

everytime I see a Makasu post in here I always perk up! I love your portraits. this newest one looks great even unfinished - there's a lot of personality implied with a very simple stance/expression. I really envy that. :>

 

[Makasu]

Aww Moxie is going to make me blush! But this is from the head. No portrait this time. But its artist(s) such as yourself that motivate me. I see how hard you guys are working and it makes me want to work even harder! Its very inspiring to me.