ultimaodin
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I should edit it now huh! That was one chapter ending I wasn't expecting. I thought it was going to be the theif. Which leads me to some questions. Was Serai stuck in that form and how did she learn to take form of animals so quickly as well as escape in the duration of a day. (after all Reives sees her the night before and then she's gone. Obviously she was the "rough wolf" that the gaurds were talking about.
Secondly when ummm darn what's her name ummm Petal dies I was wondering how Lunair was still going to have the virus. Serai was a plot twist I didn't expect!
By the way that wasn't meant to be a question it was a statement. I was stating how sweet your storylines and that are!
One thing though. I hell enjoyed the carnival but could you not set a time limit for it. You no so that when ever you leave is when the story resumes. I wanted to see if I could get 95% at the hammer games! (I kept getting above 80% for both)
I did notice the water spirit/elemental but I was expecting to see another future glimps or another one of Reives: "I felt like I've been here before" sort of things.
Though this could came along in the next chapters which I'm looking forward too!
So far I rate your Demo 9/10! If it wasn't because of the few passibility errors and the fact you use other peoples resources, (sorry I'm intocommercial games at the moment so I'm not a fan of using anybody elses resources) it would be pretty damn close to 10/10!
I didn't even mind the first two chapters as after all they are mood setters. Plus I've played through SMT: LC's intro scene which goes for about an hour.
Secondly when ummm darn what's her name ummm Petal dies I was wondering how Lunair was still going to have the virus. Serai was a plot twist I didn't expect!
By the way that wasn't meant to be a question it was a statement. I was stating how sweet your storylines and that are!
One thing though. I hell enjoyed the carnival but could you not set a time limit for it. You no so that when ever you leave is when the story resumes. I wanted to see if I could get 95% at the hammer games! (I kept getting above 80% for both)
I did notice the water spirit/elemental but I was expecting to see another future glimps or another one of Reives: "I felt like I've been here before" sort of things.
Though this could came along in the next chapters which I'm looking forward too!
So far I rate your Demo 9/10! If it wasn't because of the few passibility errors and the fact you use other peoples resources, (sorry I'm intocommercial games at the moment so I'm not a fan of using anybody elses resources) it would be pretty damn close to 10/10!
I didn't even mind the first two chapters as after all they are mood setters. Plus I've played through SMT: LC's intro scene which goes for about an hour.
This game is inspiring! :thumb: