@razendnomar: Ah, I see what you mean. I haven't got rid of it, it's still in the actual game, I just disabled it for that particular screen.
@GreenGreen: Thanks. Please do try it out.
@006: Thanks. I see what you mean about the tutorial images, but the paper is supposed to be ripped, as it's ment to come from a survival book that's missing loads of pages. The text is just a mistake on my part, I hadn't really taken any notice of it before you pointed it out. I'll change it.
I've been thinking about the storyline, and I know I said I'd not change it, but I think I've come up with something that's better. It's no longer really similar to I Am Legend, but it still keeps along the same path. Of course, if I was to change the storyline with the new stuff I've come up with, it would mean pretty much starting again with the eventing of the intro and story stuff, but I could keep some of the missions I'd done. I'm thinking I might, though.
Ok, so here goes. Some new story Ideas I've had:
There have been zombies around for a few weeks, but at the start of the game, the army are finally overrun by them.
At the start of the game, the evacuation of the citizens finally happens.
Joe is left behind when he is bitten.
The survivors contact Joe, for they know he survived. They give him a week to try and cure or obliterate the effected before they bomb the city. Missions are updated through Joe’s PDA from the base back on the mainland.
The army cannot return to the island for risk of spreading the infection.
At the time of the army leaving, almost all supplies were abandoned and dropped everywhere to make room for more people. Joe can use these supplies when he finds them.
Joe is in Radio contact with the army on the mainland.
So they are the ideas I had that just fit into the plot. However, I have changed rather a lot of the main plot, and I have a new write up here. It's still quite an early WIP, but I'm sure it could definatly work better. One main change I've thought about is that the zombie do not come form an experiment that went wrong. But I'm not going to say what my new idea is. Here is the new begining storyline:
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It’s now the Seventh day. The first week is over. The creatures that have been terrorising the small island of the coast of America show no sign of giving way. They’re numbers are too great, and the Army cannot continue the fight against them. They are the undead. ‘Zombies’. Nobody has any idea where they have come from, or why. Millions are being killed every day. The General, Joe Turner, is woken by Sergeant Gills, who brings even graver news. The zombies have breached the defences in the blockade keeping them in the East of the city. Joe grabs his gun and runs to the defences, where the zombies are pouring through over the breach. The soldiers guarding it are no more, but as Joe and Gills watch, they rise again, and join the zombie army. Calling for reinforcements, Joe fires into the crowd of moaning and tripping bodies. Machine Guns flare up behind him, felling more, but as one falls, twenty crowd for its place. They are unstoppable. Joe calls for a retreat, and the army falls back. Suddenly, another sergeant runs up to him, and gives him the best news he has heard. The evacuation of the civilians was read, and Joes tells him that they will give him as much time as possible to get everyone away. Then the battle continues. A fire explodes into life in front of the army. Many fall, and then rise again around them, and soldiers fight each other. But, as Joe and his army retreats more, the helicopters come up behind him. He calls for the final retreat, and the survivors pile into the machines. But as Joe tries to escape, a one of the monsters jumps at him, and bites into the back of his neck. Joe falls back. He swings his pistol round, and fires into the zombie’s face. It crumples, but so does Joe. Sergeant Gills nearly jumps back off to save him, but he is stopped by Lieutenant Slater. Joe looks up at them all from the ground, and calls out for them to leave, and to get as far away as possible. Then he collapses...
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Ok, I want some comments. What does everyone think? An improvement? Please let me know.
it may just be me but i dont like that style.
