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Her fingers are extremely crooked, you might want to check out some hand anatomy and balance them out. Besides that, it looks pretty well shaded. I would take a look at her ears though, they don't seem exactly lined up. Also, Mr. Jason, I don't see any camel toe and that is not very constructive or mature. Hope this helps! :P
It's very good though, much better than what I can usually draw! I used to have a few books on general anatomy, but I usually just Google everything now. Did you draw your avatar as well? It's very nice.
Neck is way too long if you ask me, but aside from that, it's actually very good, then again, what do I know, I can't even draw anymore lol, haven't done it in so long...
I think the face is a bit androgynous? Idk, the body is fine, but it feels particularly not particularly feminine. Like, if you remove the lower body and the small bit that appears to be tits (which are kinda sharp), it'd still look p much exactly the same except no idea if male or femme. Just my opinion.
Only thing I've got to say to that is "I should change the hair and lower clothing to make it look like a guy."
But I'm definitely gonna need to get more gender specific over the summer, thanks for pointing those things out although I believe i'd draw a pretty darn good giraffe (stick figure).