Brendon;144605 said:
This is one of my first castle's I make. Any comments?
Two major things I noticed, for one the wall lacks a top. You need something that is two tiles deep, like the tops of the ramparts. As it is it looks two dimensional.
Also, the bridge seems to extend rather far. I'd actually stop it at the point where it meets the wall and have a stone path the rest of the way.
This is unless your castle is meant to be surrounded by a wall. If it is in fact just enclosed by a moat, and the walls are actually a man made abyss between castle and the rest of the land, then it is okay, although I'd suggest moving the ends of the bridge so that they have an equal amount of purchase on the land on either side. The top in particular looks like it is floating on the abyss in this case. Depending on how you're designing this castle, basically, the bridge might need to move further back or further forward.
The finished product, with the fog, looks pretty good, though. Personally I wouldn't have the soldiers stood behind the standards but that's just nitpicking at this point.
Sonic80, not much to say, except that perhaps you could make the shade of blue lighter to stand out on the background some more? The rest seem readable enough, but the shade of blue blends a bit too well with the backdrop.