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Dont be angry for me, maybe its not screenshot, but I dont want do topic specially for this one trailer:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WYUBcuuGOp0

Text in english (because original is in polish):

First text (when on background are clouds): if anyone is able to prevail over death?
Second text: NO

Text in 1:22 : THE MYSTERY
Next: OFFERING
Third: CATASTROPHE
1:27 : RULES
FIFTH: GOD

1:38 - SOON

I know is not topic for this stuff, but I dont want do more simillar things and I dont want creat topic only for this.

So, I want know yours opinions about this short movie :P


ps; sorry for my english
 
Woocash":167x3ovy said:
Dont be angry for me, maybe its not screenshot, but I dont want do topic specially for this one trailer:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WYUBcuuGOp0

Text in english (because original is in polish):

First text (when on background are clouds): if anyone is able to prevail over death?
Second text: NO

Text in 1:22 : THE MYSTERY
Next: OFFERING
Third: CATASTROPHE
1:27 : RULES
FIFTH: GOD

1:38 - SOON

I know is not topic for this stuff, but I dont want do more simillar things and I dont want creat topic only for this.

So, I want know yours opinions about this short movie :P


ps; sorry for my english

It's not bar, but you should use diferent colour of the first two lines, , or make a longer pause before blak ink covers it becasue it is imposible to see the letters. Efect at the end doesn't feel right.
 
Here is a screenshot of one of my game's scene.
screenshot6.png

My mapping isn't that nice.
 
Commodore Whynot @ It's much better now. The colours are more atmospheric. Only tags on the walls are a bit to 'clean' if you know what i mean. on the white onse put some gentle gradient with slightly darker colour on the bottom side. As well paint always dribble, more or less, but ther is always at least couple of drips.
 
You know, I'm not going going to comment on anyone specific screen-shots, and this isn't really constructive or anything, but I've just over several dozen pages and I still really don't think it's said enough:

The mapping here is just... incredible. I mean, I think even the... less developed maps included just puts the so-called professionals - the people who actually get paid to do this to complete shame.
 
Woocash

Bottom right, that tree stump doesnt look right there. It's hovering above man-made structure.

Fruit Vendors stall is hovering over crates.

The overlays are too harsh and shroud detail from your map.

Are the pillars inwater there? It's too hard to tell... if they are, they should be partly visible below the water.
 
The cells are kind of big for a prison, usually the prisoners don't get that much room to walk around. That probably explains why it looks empty. Also, try lowering the saturation on the map a little, the colours seem too strong to me, especially for a place as gloomy as a prison.
 
Dadevster":2mmaxz54 said:
The cells are kind of big for a prison, usually the prisoners don't get that much room to walk around. That probably explains why it looks empty. Also, try lowering the saturation on the map a little, the colours seem too strong to me, especially for a place as gloomy as a prison.

Wow, I am glad you aren't a prison designer. That would just be inhumane. They look fine, although having sacks and crates in with prisoners doesn't really make sense
 
Brendan_PR":18o65eah said:
Dadevster":18o65eah said:
The cells are kind of big for a prison, usually the prisoners don't get that much room to walk around. That probably explains why it looks empty. Also, try lowering the saturation on the map a little, the colours seem too strong to me, especially for a place as gloomy as a prison.

Wow, I am glad you aren't a prison designer. That would just be inhumane. They look fine, although having sacks and crates in with prisoners doesn't really make sense
I see, that makes sense. What do you recommend I put instead?

@Dadevster: Good idea desaturating the tileset ;)
 
@arion: I think that's what I did. I used Images>Adjustments>Hue & Saturation and took the middle bar down a few notches. Here's the new one:

tumpic.png


You may notice a little something I did with the pots.
 
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