The Screenshot Thread

[thios]

Looks interesting. However, it looks like the big tree is floating on the flowers in the first screenshot.

There might be a small mapping error somewhere on this map, but I think the resultate ended up pretty well. Everything that's missing now is some fog effects and animals.(For those who have sharp eyes, you can see there's a cat in one of the windows.)

Thanks, I will change that..

You're map is nice, not exclusive, but nice,, in particular the cat..

 

[dadevvtsvre]

Thios: I'd use less flowers in that forest map. It's pretty loaded with flowers right now. The random bits of brown path may be used too much as well. And you've misused the "grass with beige dirt around it" autotile. (a lot of people do it, I used to misuse it as well) It's supposed to be used on those beige dirt paths to look like weeds growing on the roads. I like the light on the map though, very soft and subtle.

The_Shadow: Yeah, it's a very good map, not too cluttered and easy to navigate. The pond is a nice touch, but you have some depth issues as the cliff with the waterfalls seems to go several feet underwater yet the ground on the left side doesn't. (also, kitty!)

 

[Sonata]

I changed the room a bit and edited some colors, especially of the sprite, so the colors fit together.

That looks nice and simple, I like it. Although you may want to have an outline around your characters, maybe you could post a screen contrasting outlines and no outlines to see what people think.

 

[Reives]

@Thios:
At first the structure of the second screenshot confused me, since the upper wall's bottom looked a bit awkward given its lift and lighting. But when I realized what was going on I found it to be an awesome concept. I'm very tempted to utilize a structure of similar concept, in fact! The lighting is a bit strange since it's random, but given the ethereal setting, there's probably some fantasy-esque suspension of disbelief to let that pass. c: Good stuff.

 

[Skyla Doragono]

I changed the room a bit and edited some colors, especially of the sprite, so the colors fit together.

Are you going for a Cave Story look? 'cause... damn.

 

[Twirly]

I changed the room a bit and edited some colors, especially of the sprite, so the colors fit together.

Are you going for a Cave Story look? 'cause... damn.

Yeah, I think Cave Story influenced me... :D

Still imrpoving it :D

 

[MukanshinBlack]

Brighter is looking better, Surly. I think you should make the player sprite less plain though.

 

[thios]

Thios: I'd use less flowers in that forest map. It's pretty loaded with flowers right now. The random bits of brown path may be used too much as well. And you've misused the "grass with beige dirt around it" autotile. (a lot of people do it, I used to misuse it as well) It's supposed to be used on those beige dirt paths to look like weeds growing on the roads. I like the light on the map though, very soft and subtle.

These flowers are a little to much, I agree. Also that brown path. Thanks for you're feedback. I will change these.

@Thios:
At first the structure of the second screenshot confused me, since the upper wall's bottom looked a bit awkward given its lift and lighting. But when I realized what was going on I found it to be an awesome concept. I'm very tempted to utilize a structure of similar concept, in fact! The lighting is a bit strange since it's random, but given the ethereal setting, there's probably some fantasy-esque suspension of disbelief to let that pass. c: Good stuff.

Feedback from the master.. Thanks! You're screens are always as my computer background..

These guys having a meeting. There is something wrong in fantasy land (the table of nine). This map is set in my icecastle, I will post that screen soon. I love it, to make maps which you must consider how it was made and why it is made. I'm glad you liked it.

 

[Skyla Doragono]

Yeah, I think Cave Story influenced me... :D

Still imrpoving it :D

I normally like darker colors better, but that is really, really nice.

 

[Reives]

@Thios:
Heheh, thanks. By the way, it may be cool to try and put enlarged round RTP light char-sets on "add" mode to the torches, just so that the shadows from the twilight-esque lighting don't shade it (as much).

@Twirly:
The new version looks much more refined! Great stuff, nice and clean. I think the characters could use more of a pop in contrast to the background, although I think it may just be WIP right now.

~

A little "Where's Waldo" -esque thing for fun:

 

[HarryE]

@Reives: That where's waldo thingy is quite tricky. You gotta think outside the box for some of them. :P

Hello you lucky people of RMXP-land. I've been working very very slowly on Loz Chapter 2, but rest assured it is in the works. Here's some pics of the first dungeon of the game, Varrutocko. A creepy, zombie-infested forest.

Spoiler: Outside

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f359/brunotherhino/Varrutocko1.png

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f359/brunotherhino/Varrutocko2.png

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f359/brunotherhino/Varrutocko3.png

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f359/brunotherhino/Varrutocko4.png

Spoiler: Lair

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f359/brunotherhino/Varrutocko5.png

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f359/brunotherhino/Varrutocko6.png

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f359/brunotherhino/Varrutocko7.png

Spoiler: Swamp

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f359/brunotherhino/VarrutockoSwamp1.png

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f359/brunotherhino/VarrutockoSwamp2.png

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f359/brunotherhino/VarrutockoSwamp3.png

Spoiler: Dark, creepy section of the forest

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f359/brunotherhino/VarrutockoDarkness1.png

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f359/brunotherhino/VarrutockoDarkness2.png

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f359/brunotherhino/VarrutockoDarkness3.png

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f359/brunotherhino/VarrutockoDarkness4.png

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f359/brunotherhino/VarrutockoDarkness5.png

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f359/brunotherhino/VarrutockoDarkness6.png

 

[Ynlraey]

Uh yeah, dialogue not final.

 

[thios]

@Thios:
Heheh, thanks. By the way, it may be cool to try and put enlarged round RTP light char-sets on "add" mode to the torches, just so that the shadows from the twilight-esque lighting don't shade it (as much).

It's looks really great, thanks Reives. Greetings from the Netherlands.. :toot:

Edit: About you're screen, there is a piece missing from a three, above, in the middle, before the cave..

 

[Matthew_95]

Uh yeah, dialogue not final.

Love it. Although, the ring on the bottom looks a bit flat. But the total looks really nice.

 

[craybest]

Already commented on yout screen on the othe forum Nessiah, so I won't repeat myself.
WIP of an almost finished tileset, HEAVILY inspired from the Secret of Mana series.
untill I find a good SoM battlesystem, I'll keep doing graphics for it. (ignrore the out of resolution top right sword)

 

[BwdYeti]

Something I thought I should work on since I've planned it for a while. Testing out showing multiple enemy move ranges concurrently, like in FE9/10. Currently it uses the same array that holds general attack range data so it can't persist when you move your own units around, and I might change the graphic to something less vibrant and more flat, but it's a start and gives a visual representation of where any enemies can do things.

 

[Sonata]

craybest, that looks nice. I'm wondering if your palettes are final though? It looks like you could definitely reduce the saturation.

 

[Sailor Taurus]

Uh yeah, dialogue not final.

A bit of a perspective error here.

The base of the ship is one tile in length.
The building is one tile in length.
The building is one tile away from the bottom most edge of the base by one tile, meaning it's pretty much floating on nothing.

Not only that, but one tile is incredibly thin. It looks like the airship would tear in two if it happened across a gentle breeze at just the right angle. You need to make it a lot bigger.

Unless this is meant to be a sidescroller of some sort, in which case you need to remove the deceptive perspective.

 

[006]

Uh yeah, dialogue not final.

A bit of a perspective error here.

The base of the ship is one tile in length.
The building is one tile in length.
The building is one tile away from the bottom most edge of the base by one tile, meaning it's pretty much floating on nothing.

Not only that, but one tile is incredibly thin. It looks like the airship would tear in two if it happened across a gentle breeze at just the right angle. You need to make it a lot bigger.

Unless this is meant to be a sidescroller of some sort, in which case you need to remove the deceptive perspective.

It is a side scroller, with a unique perspective. And Ynlraey, please, please fix the right side of the base of the ship, it is very off.

 

[TheInquisitor]

Your Where's Waldo type map, Reives, is better than most people's game maps. :P