The Screenshot Thread
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Diegoale2000
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$t3v0! don't go all lovey dovey on me now! nah but seriously, glad you like it :P
TCoFA: yeah Don't ask, i dont wanna think of it myself LOL
TCoFA: yeah Don't ask, i dont wanna think of it myself LOL
Lust Dragon
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Those screen was really nice Diego, is there any demo will be released?
Well im pretty new, but i whipped this up just before:
A cliff. Interesting.
http://www.imagewoof.com/view_thumb/5ab641753/screen.JPG[/img]
Same cliff ingame. (yes hes bald i havent done the hair yet.
http://www.imagewoof.com/view_thumb/191b81725/Screen2.JPG[/img]
A cliff. Interesting.
http://www.imagewoof.com/view_thumb/5ab641753/screen.JPG[/img]
Same cliff ingame. (yes hes bald i havent done the hair yet.
http://www.imagewoof.com/view_thumb/191b81725/Screen2.JPG[/img]
This is a map from my new game I think it's a bit to crowded though.
Map
In Game
Map
In Game
Ohmygod I'm a idiot. The point is there is a waterfall going out of sight off the cliff, but there are waterfalls going the other way as well. Lol. Will edit (and thanks)
@noobo
I think you have too many of the same thing. those round green little plants, the same ones are freaking everywhere. Get an addon for some flowers of something =]. Also, i think for the cliff you should put more whitespace at the top, it looks like the cliff is covering the mountains and it makes it seem like the whole thing slopes upwards at the north end. But what do i know =]
@noobo
I think you have too many of the same thing. those round green little plants, the same ones are freaking everywhere. Get an addon for some flowers of something =]. Also, i think for the cliff you should put more whitespace at the top, it looks like the cliff is covering the mountains and it makes it seem like the whole thing slopes upwards at the north end. But what do i know =]
This is a sneak peak of Aveyond II, which will be out in November. All tilesets will be available for everyone else after the game is released. 
http://www.amaranthia.com/uploads/img46b16cac77115.png[/img]
http://www.amaranthia.com/uploads/img46b16cac77115.png[/img]
SakuraPhoenix
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@Lambchop Wow, J'adore that tileset. Lovin' the use of blues also^^
Well here's part of the begining for my game as of yet...
http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n225 ... onOver.png[/IMG]
I think the Perspective may be off.
Well here's part of the begining for my game as of yet...
http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n225 ... onOver.png[/IMG]
I think the Perspective may be off.
Red Dawn you need a LOT more detail. As has been stated the water needs to come form somewhere. Noobo its too green, you need some colour. Flowers or something. Maybe these should be in the mapping improvement thread if you are looking for advice and not just showing off.
Lookin good Lambchop. Wow Aveyond 2 is going to be out so soon? Great to here that the tilesets will be avaliable to everyone!
Kieara looks good to me! I don't think the perspective is off... hmm.
Lookin good Lambchop. Wow Aveyond 2 is going to be out so soon? Great to here that the tilesets will be avaliable to everyone!
Kieara looks good to me! I don't think the perspective is off... hmm.
Red Dawn-Thank you I'm editing now I also found some flowers but I had to stick them into a charset which can be found here
http://www.rmxp.org/forums/showthread.php?p=253362#post253362
EDIT:
Updated map
http://www.rmxp.org/forums/showthread.php?p=253362#post253362
EDIT:
Updated map
neo rpgomaniak
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noobo that is nice but I don't like this symetric shape of this cliff and the panorama is cut on the right.
Kaze I think it looks good ^^
Noobo that's better, but now I think you use too many different flowers! And agreed about the symertrical part. Any chance of a tree with leaves? Try using a bit of dark grass. Maybe a little bit of variety in the centre of it? Really should be in the mapping help thread... Nice work editing the flowers to a tileset add-on though.
Noobo that's better, but now I think you use too many different flowers! And agreed about the symertrical part. Any chance of a tree with leaves? Try using a bit of dark grass. Maybe a little bit of variety in the centre of it? Really should be in the mapping help thread... Nice work editing the flowers to a tileset add-on though.
Ok how about now?
http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/8956/mgamecopysi9.png[/IMG]
http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/8956/mgamecopysi9.png[/IMG]
When they mention "symmetric shape of this cliff", they're saying it's odd to find one shaped perfectly like a diamond. You might want to change that before little details like the flowers. (This being a mountaintop and not a garden, it would help to make these actually look more like weeds. Nothing wrong with "those round green little plants" either, as long as you mix it up a bit.)
There's more but I'll leave it at that.
Also, diegoale's stuff is inspiring.
There's more but I'll leave it at that.
Also, diegoale's stuff is inspiring.
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