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@kiearaphoenix

The overall aspect of the map is great, the mapping is fine too. I really like the kind of light at the top. The problem with all of this is the tileset. The concept and the shape of the objects are O.K. but it kinda lacks of details at some places. Also, i do not recommend using too much gradient for your walls.

@reverseblade

I really like your menu, expect for the big grey selection bar part of the windowskin...

@WeissRaben

The text is really cool but the texture...does not fit with the background too well. Also, i never been a big fan of concept art for titlescreens, wouldn't it be better if you use and actual image or something more representative of your game?

@StrawberryBomb

The art is strange to me but that dosen't prevent the titlescreen for looking really great. You might want to remove the Melusine under the statue, while its art its still a titlescreen. Im not too sure about the text either (not the one on top, that one is ok), it dosen't fit well enough to me. Would look better with either another font or some texture to go with it.

Great job all of you.
 
It looks really nice that way Lust Dragon.
There's just one problem I see :
If the water level goes up and down like tides, then I suggest to remove the windows underwater (which wood probably break due to the pressure of the water, apart from the fact that they're made of wood). If the place got flooded then everything's okay...
 
As I said before in that other thread, J.D. I think you should change the trunk colour. Only this time I come with examples.
Yours: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v45/M ... reeori.png[/img]
The yellow really stands out a whole lot more than I think it should.
I suggest toning it down a bit to match the earthy colours around it.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v45/M ... /tree1.png[/IMG] or http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v45/M ... a/tree.png[/IMG]
just a suggestion though.

@ccoa: That walk way is so nice! I like how you used green, blue and white stones.
 
That looks pretty nice InvisibleDrifter. I love those little statues. I DO hope you plan on changing the color of the leaves on that tree though. That green is pretty horrid if you ask me. As far as the grass is concerned, I think you lost a bit of depth when you lightened it, but it fits the surroundings, so I'm a little torn on whether you should keep it the way it is or revert to your old colors. Maybe something in between would look good?
 
You're right i should go for a darker or less saturated look for the leaves since they do clash too much, i become color blind once in a while ':|,
I will try that with the grass now, thanks for the tip man ^_^
 
InvisibleDrifter;220633 said:
Well maybe not stand out, it was just a shitty green i chose XD, i'm just not sure about what color to use against the grass, what do you guys think of this?

And no worries i wont be coming back with a picture every hour, just want to know i have that part of the tree right before i move on.

http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u132 ... r/pic3.png[/IMG]

EDit: I may just make some grass similar to the rtp in the end :/

I think you should switch the color of the tree leaves with the color of the grass.

Grass isn't THAT dark, and trees aren't THAT bright.

That's all.
 
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