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Update:  I fixed the CSS bugs in IE6 & 7.  It turns out IE6 doesn't support selecting multiple classes, something I ought to have known already.  The IE7 bug was somewhat more obscure and I'm still having issues with horizontal scrolling (which shouldn't be happening because nothing is overflowing).  If anyone can figure that out I'd greatly appreciate the solution!

It looks relatively awful in IE6, in IE7 acceptable.

Thanks for the input regarding the footer; I knew it was a risky choice.  I will try making it smaller for starters before abandoning it entirely; I'll let you guys know when I get to it (I'll have to rework the background a bit).
 

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Doublepostin cause I can:
I got the chance to do some more work on my site.  There are a lot of updates to the backend, including drag & drop menu rearranging and some changes to the database structure that won't be apparent to you guys.  More importantly though I made the footer smaller, I'd like to get opinions (it's fugged in IE again so don't bother if you're using that browser, I will get around to fixing IE bugs when I finish a few more features so I can do it all at once).  Once again, the site is http://www.justenrobertson.com
 

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well, only some of the pages are up but here is my current project:

Link Deleted ~N

its all mostly mine cept the drop-down nav... i havent learned how to do that stuff yet so i dl a program that does a very nice job. and im gonna re-design the banner real son so it looks... better...

DO NOT GO TO THE "Our Stuff" PAGE! there has been a severe error and it apparently links to a porno site... i did not do it it just seemed to do it on its own... do not click it i will fix it ASAP but leave it alone for now!!!!

ok, i have an erro page up now instead of it accidentally linkin somewhere else... i will upload the appropriate file(s) later.
 
Welcome to ViZualResolution! We are a very new community as of July! We do not currently have our resources and downloads pages up yet but I will be working on that ASAP. in the meantime, check out our Forums or visit our affiliates! We will be offering your very own page, where we will link to your projects, in the future. As of now we are lacking members and so i would love it if you would join our forums! once we reach 25 members, i will be looking for moderators so stay sharp and respect our forums because you may be the one I will be looking into for a position!

So what exactly is the incentive to join?  Or for that matter, what is the point of the site other than joining the forums?
 

Chief

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like i said... im not done yet... thats just there to show some content... it will be more... filled and will have better content... but i didnt have uch time on my ahnds...
 

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You should consider not launching your site until you're ready for visitors.  The first impression is the only impression you get, especially on the web, and your audience isn't going to change or expand after your first showing.  Show it off now and you will show 90% of all the people likely to ever look at it, because they won't be coming back or linking to it in its current state.

If you don't have time now to put any real effort into the site, what makes you think you'll have more time in the future?

I'm not particularly fond of people showing off sites here if they're not interested in criticism, which you don't seem to be.  You're not interested in criticism, and the front page is simply an ad asking visitors to sign up in your forums; ergo you're advertising, and advertising is against forum rules.  I'm going to delete the link in your original post.  Don't repost it until you have real content and an intent to receive and respond to criticism.
 

Chief

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i have no problem with that... im actually gonna overhaul the whole design and re-design it completely. once i get that done and i have "actual" content, ill come back and show you guys... otherwise, I apologize for the inconvenience.
 

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http://www.etheon.net

something ive been working on since yesterday; I like it so far. Still needs some functionality additions; I know some stuff is missing, like form formatting and shit. and also a logo to replace the current EE-thee-on. But I like where its heading so far.
 

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I like the pattern you're using behind the header, but I don't much see the point of the grass tufts or where they fit into the (admittedly minimal) aesthetic theme. There's not a whole lot to complain or comment about here. I dig your flashfic, though I don't think you're asking for comments on it, very Lovecraft (and by the way the body is double-posted, you should not repost it in the full text in the software you're using, but rather continue from where the preview leaves off).
 

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On layout:
Space the page heading up so there's at least a pixel or two between the baseline and the top of the white body background, and space the footer stripes down a similar amount. I see what you're going for there but in its current state the page is already short on depth and contrast, you really don't want elements blending together on top of it. I'd also extend that stripe completely to the edges. The navigation tabs are sort of tall and skinny, usually short and wide looks nicer in a modern design like yours (and in general, really). Other than that I like what you did with the placement and design of your headings and page title, it shows some creativity.

On Typography:
Try a nice sans-serif font for your body text and your navigation. Tahoma might look nice in there. Courier gives you a little nerd cred but that's the wrong place to be advertising it, and sans-serif is going to look much better alongside your modern, minimalistic design choice and your cursive headings and page titles.

On color:

Your brown background could stand to be a little more saturated, and I'm not sold on the gray in the tabs or the footer stripe. You have a selection of neutral colors (black, brown, white) and you've muted the brown pretty severely, the last thing you want to do is throw another neutral color into the mix - it gives the color scheme an overall blandness. I would take that orange and drop it down a couple shades, then repeat it somewhere in the page such as the subheadings or the navigation tabs for balance. Also, even though you're obviously shooting for minimalism a little texture in the background wouldn't kill. For an example of your color scheme put to really good use check out Rob Goodlatte's blog. Note the different uses of contrast to set out different page sections. Don't feel like you have to compete with stuff like that right off the bat, just think of it as inspiration. :)

Finally, on code:
It looks like you haven't really started picking up CSS yet, so I won't nitpick too much, but eventually you're going to want to learn to use external stylesheets and remove all the inline styling instructions. You're obviously using a table-based layout, which is icky, and hopefully you'll move toward proper semantic HTML as you learn CSS! You do have one error though, "height" is not a standard attribute for a table tag. You can replace that with:
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style='height:xxx;'
to validate properly. Later on you'll want to do that in a proper stylesheet rather than inline.
 
Thank you SO MUCH  N, I really really appreciate that :)  And yeah I've been thinking about learning to use CSS too. Though I have been thinking about learning Flash too. It's too bad I have to turn this assignment in but after I fix it I'll post it here again XD. Thanks!
 

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