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Shadow's Stew of Shoops

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I take it you watch Heroes?

I like the facial features (specifically, you did an excellent job with the nose) but your fingers look a little strane, especially in the way they're positioned. I can't tell if you're holding something, if you have an irregular number of fingers, or if they're spaced oddly, or what. The "very broad strokes" style can work very well, but only if you're good at defining shapes well without finer lines.
 
Tentacles and a hot anime girl with thunder thighs?  Oh yes.  We know what comes next.  XD

Awesome art.  : )
 
Tentacle sex eh? Still loving the style. Its incredibly diverse. I can't remember what it reminds me of necessarily. I think kinda like Egoraptors? Not to sure. But her hands need a little work. While they aren't the main focus of the picture they are a part of it. The right one kinda looks like a hoove. And the left one just looks a tad bit mangled. :(
 
it's a little late, but still incredibly suggestive :x

The eyes are too high, and the elbow is wonky-looking, but the pose is pretty nicely dynamic :3
 
I actually like it a lot! Despite the slight errors. Whats wrong with the elbow though? Just through a slight curve in it and it'll look just fine. Maybe the arms a tad bit on eht skinny side compared to the rest of her body. But was it taken with a digital camera? The lighting looks kinda odd to me.
 
Makasu":38dgmwkx said:
I actually like it a lot! Despite the slight errors. Whats wrong with the elbow though? Just through a slight curve in it and it'll look just fine. Maybe the arms a tad bit on eht skinny side compared to the rest of her body. But was it taken with a digital camera? The lighting looks kinda odd to me.

Its all in photoshop.
 
It looks great, Shadow.  I decided to give you a noob artist's opinion in return for your critiques.

The face is a bit off... maybe it's just the eys, like Venetia said though.  I can't tell.
And the elbow didn't give me any thoughts until I read her post about it.  Looks pretty good to me.
However; my only real concern is her right arm.  Her left upper arm is very long and slender, which should be the same with her right arm.  But the way she's facing,  and the way her hand gesture is posed, suggests that you'd see her elbow from behind her.  But instead it's just missing. Not really a huge deal.  Just something I picked up.

Also, the color looks great.  I like the theme, aside from the orange eyes brought a little negative attention.  Like they were out of place with the rest of the brown.  However; I've never been one for orange and brown without a little complimentary green to tie them together...  I was raised by fashion crazed women.  Oh god, someone save me.

Looks great!  Happy Halloween.
 
Mikee":1geq99e4 said:
It looks great, Shadow.  I decided to give you a noob artist's opinion in return for your critiques.

The face is a bit off... maybe it's just the eys, like Venetia said though.  I can't tell.
And the elbow didn't give me any thoughts until I read her post about it.  Looks pretty good to me.
However; my only real concern is her right arm.  Her left upper arm is very long and slender, which should be the same with her right arm.  But the way she's facing,  and the way her hand gesture is posed, suggests that you'd see her elbow from behind her.  But instead it's just missing. Not really a huge deal.  Just something I picked up.

Also, the color looks great.  I like the theme, aside from the orange eyes brought a little negative attention.  Like they were out of place with the rest of the brown.  However; I've never been one for orange and brown without a little complimentary green to tie them together...  I was raised by fashion crazed women.  Oh god, someone save me.

Looks great!  Happy Halloween.

You're absolutely right about the green, good call. I tried to work in a more limited palette by using only browns and near-browns, but I can see why it would benefit from a good unsaturated green. Though I thought the orange eyes were a good thing, you know, orange for halloween :X

Can you feel my fury?
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Makasu":brkn0wzt said:
Mikee":brkn0wzt said:
Happy Halloween.

Its not Halloween anymore Bro. Either ways its really hard to tell your digital stuff from your traditional stuff!

Yes, we've grasped that it is not Halloween.  No need to post if you don't understand the satire within the situation.  Anyway.  I like the new one.  It's a lot more realistic compared to your earlier works.  I'm surprised actually.  And you seem to be in a very dark, earthy mood lately.  I suits you, however.  I really really love what you've done with the lighting highlights in this piece.  Looks great.
 
Mikee":3113i518 said:
Makasu":3113i518 said:
Mikee":3113i518 said:
Happy Halloween.

Its not Halloween anymore Bro. Either ways its really hard to tell your digital stuff from your traditional stuff!

Yes, we've grasped that it is not Halloween.  No need to post if you don't understand the satire within the situation.  Anyway.  I like the new one.  It's a lot more realistic compared to your earlier works.  I'm surprised actually.  And you seem to be in a very dark, earthy mood lately.  I suits you, however.  I really really love what you've done with the lighting highlights in this piece.  Looks great.

Thats because it is more realistic compared to my earlier works. I can flop between styles you know (most people can, anyways).
 
I wasn't surprised that you could switch between styles.  Just surprised at the sudden change in styles you've had lately.  I, myself, am illustrating a book for first graders right now...  They don't like anime girls with enormous "bazongas" in elementary school.  They prefer something a little less...  awesome I guess.  At least it's giving me a chance to try new things.
 

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