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Wow, those are neat. I'm digging the armor designs. Your coloring technique for the white haired guy is simple but it looks nice and smooth. makes me wish I could see something from you that was less hasty-looking though: while the sketchy style is neat, I'm interested in seeing something with more deliberate, smooth, and clean linework from you. Just wondering how you would make it look.
 
I like the redhead vampire(?) one with the huge rack. Though I feel like her hips should be larger to complete the hourglass better. The scene below it looks like vector-work, which is pretty neat :)

I like the work on the WIP action scene, too. Feels really dynamic.

The ginormous boobs on nearly everything is actually pretty amusing to me. It's like your calling-card, haha
 
Time":2v0jxd4p said:
there's only really one thing that can be said after looking through this topic:

b-b-bazonga`s @_@;

god I missed that

oh and yeah your stuff is super cool, chief! it really is nice to see something besides generic animu stuff
 
It evokes feelings of anger.

After browsing this thread, I'm rather impressed and very motivated to boot up PS and get something done.
 

mawk

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I understand that the sketchy linework is probably a stylistic attempt, but it could work a lot better if you put in a bit more time and made it into a bona-fide piece. The stuff in the back looks awfully clumsy, and the big friendly rounded Flash-paintbrush edges kind of take the edge off of the action the piece is supposed to convey.

The seam on the helmet doesn't match up with the seam on the visor, either. It messes with my perspective, even if I try to trick myself into thinking he's wearing it askew for some reason.

Gotta look good on that battlefield, yassuh! Tilted hat ain't never done no harm to nobody! That's what I bring the guns for!

Oh, I just noticed that it's a flat-planed crest at the front of the helmet. Disregard that last point, then.
 

mawk

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Hi, did'ja see anything I posted?

This one works much better in the sketchy style, and I really like the dull colour scheme here, but the anatomy is weak below the shoulders. His arms and torso, I can't really tell what's going on.

How long did this one/the last one take you, out of curiosity?
 
Just a few minutes. I just slather, crop, and fill. I just do these for quick practice to see what I can churn out without having to think to hard.
Yeah, I read, the white-knight's hat doesn't align up, and its suppose to. I also feel his shoulder pad should be angled with his arm, instead of jutting out like that.
 

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