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Don't know why, but this one really caught my eye / drew my attention...

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p251/wumpihat/properghostcare.jpg[/img]

The top image.

I'm impressed!  "She's Wump, She's Wump.  She's in my head..."

Be Well
 
http://bb.xieke.com/files/kensalcolour.jpg[/img]

Note how the detail deteriorates from the waist down? The face and shoulders are incredibly good, but then it goes down to cross-hatching on the legs and feet, which is not evident on the upper portion of the... art is too shallow a word. Masterpiece.

This is the only fault I am at liberty to point out; I cannot express in text how beautiful your drawing is. Bloody fantastic.

EDIT: May I add that there are people out there who would pay serious cash for your talents. I know I would.
 

Anonymous

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The shading stopping was mostly deliberate. I was planning on shading the whole thing but I decided not to because those two images were mostly made to help me with the spriting, I had to know what the details were there before I deided which ones to keep when I simplified it into a sprite.

The hips are also deliberate, Kenny's a girl. I sortof exaggerated the flatness of her chest because I wanted to see how many LOLBISHIE fangirls I could turn into lesbians. The feet were a genuine mistake.

(For the record it's 3 so far.)
 
you need to practice feet. At the moment it seems to be your biggest problem. after that, try making more "natural" poses. The static position your characters take can be good for identifying them, but it makes them lack personality.

Try making a picture while storytelling at he same time, make the picture tell a story. You'll see it comes out better. :)

Overall it's very nice, your clothing design is good overall, but you could make it even better by researching 19th century clothing, seeing as they look parallel to that specific time.

Hope i was helpful in any way witth this, you're a good artist, I'm sure you'll go far. :)
 
It's been a while since you got a reply but it hasn't been 30 days so here I go.

I just love your stuff, your style is unique which is just so refreshing and it really stands out compared to the submissions.

You're one of the few in this section with real, artistic talent, do keep on posting.

Shading and highlight in the hair is excellent, top notch stuff.
 
love the first 2 on this page. not as wild about the last one, his trunk feels too rectangular and in a very general way he feels flat-er than the other 2. your hands and feet are getting much better too~

as always, i -love- your color schemes. Keep growing :)
 
I really like your style, you capture poses so well (like others here, I also think the one where the girl is hanging up her hat on the clothesline is especially good).  I also very much like your characters' clothes.  I collect weird/cute hats (my most recent one is a smiling carton reindeer beanie), so naturally I fell in love with the ones in your art.
 

Anonymous

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The sketchmuscles were drawn on the bus and I had nothing to reference so I made them look like wobuffets. I have no excuse for the colourmuscles I was just lazy
 
i see we're experimenting with Cleavage XD.

looking better and better. Your feet look good now too which was one of the only things i felt i could really bug you about before.

Ace~

little thing: most recent ones eyes are just a little too far apart for my liking. or too small for the head. take your pick.

the Payo girl. u may want to soften the lines on the muscle tone. it looks a little vine-like. just a tad.
 

Anonymous

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http://bb.xieke.com/files/wendyhouse.jpg[/img]

http://bb.xieke.com/files/yesterdaypaint.jpg[/img]
 
Blargh, the first scene with the wonderful little house and yard is wonderfully painted, with just the right saturations. Except the sun. The sun ruined it :(
 

Anonymous

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I stand by my belief that a sun with sunglasses makes anything better.
 

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