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i have a total love-hate relationship with ur stuff here.

on the up swing u pick colors marvelously, absolutely wonderful sense.

on the other hand allot of the actual drawings behind the beautiful colors are very .... sub-par. There's a huge break up for m here. The 2 skill sets seem farther apart then they should be. There is some great potential here for really wonderful things, but you need to work on the drawing a li'l bit.

(PS, the biggest problems are in your feet. there's a simple trick to fix this but unfortunately i can't show u without sitting down and drawing with you -_-)

Keep pluggin away, i see good things
 
I would agree with Mascarpone, on the feet anyway. The drawings themselves as a whole are extremely stylized and visually appealing, there's no doubting that, but it seems like Wump's sorta ignores the feet/shoes, making them look a little like hooves. It's fine on the sprites with the teensy feet but overall the shoes generally are just solid blobs without much definition, which is very unlike everything else. Sure it's simple, but it's well-defined. The shoes are less-so.

That's not really much to fret about for your existing pieces, but it'd be nice to see more attention paid to the feet's. Generally, when a cartoonist makes blobby-shoes, they do the same style for their complimenting extremities: the hands. But your hands are very detailed, so the lack of shoe definition it makes the characters look somehow top-heavy from the knees down.
 
holloway":1hezyq2m said:
I'd say the drawing is stylised, but in no way bad. I doubt the aim is photo realistic given the subject matter.

I'll accept Style when i see the ability to do things outside of the "Style" well. A developed style should be the end of a long road, not the beginning of your journey.
 
Mascarpone":12h8w8co said:
holloway":12h8w8co said:
I'd say the drawing is stylised, but in no way bad. I doubt the aim is photo realistic given the subject matter.

I'll accept Style when i see the ability to do things outside of the "Style" well. A developed style should be the end of a long road, not the beginning of your journey.
Apparently you have not viewed any of the countless other pieces she's posted on here. These are the current end of a bloody long road. Instead of acting like a dick, how about you actually try researching first else you come off looking a bit silly.
 
Ooh, I like all the little details, especially the flowery leggings. The palm of her hand needs a little more work though, especially around the ... You know, the side opposite the thumb.


But yeah, there should be a little more definition in the palm, and a little less chunkiness in the index finger.

Otherwise, very adorable <3
 
She's wearing gloves ins't she? If there a bit big for her hands I think the hands are fine, but if there supposed to be tight gloves I agree with Venetia. The detail is amazing great job.
 

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