When an admin calls a thread a "bitchfest," you know it was ugly. Still, I remember that thread, and the "completed games" which inspired it. *shudders*
Anyway, congratulations Anaryu. Having finally finished the game, I will tell you that I am absolutely stunned that you got all this done within the time frame of the contest. The genre and story made it seem initially like it was just going to be five hours of city locales, but you effectively wrote in all sorts of fun other areas: the park, the canyon caves, the void: good stuff.
I echo the praise you've received about the battle system, though I should tell you that once I discovered "Arcane Break," everything became much easier. Thanks to the combination of that and Proto's "Kinetic Barrier Aura" move, I'm not sure I even took direct damage during the final boss fights. You mentioned that you were going to go back and beef up the story now that the contest is over, and I heartily applaud that suggestion. The story you have now is good, but there was very clear potential for more.
Congrats again on the win. I had a great time playing the game, and should us Academy members ever get organized, I'm sure you'll do well.