A DarkSyDaZ Gallery
- Thread starter Darksydaz
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@Dayhjawk - Thank you for noticing that, i've corrected the issue... and everything looks good now...
@High Mage Vivi - I'm going to try to get to your character soon... please bond with me for a few moments.. it's been very hectic... thank you...
I've decided to come out with an Update... and some more poses to go... I think i've just about covered everything and i think my poses making is done...
For the template sitting on the edge...
For the template getting hit in the head...
Template drawing the weapon from the side...
Please Critique these sprites... it would be much appreciated...
@High Mage Vivi - I'm going to try to get to your character soon... please bond with me for a few moments.. it's been very hectic... thank you...
I've decided to come out with an Update... and some more poses to go... I think i've just about covered everything and i think my poses making is done...
For the template sitting on the edge...
For the template getting hit in the head...
Template drawing the weapon from the side...
Please Critique these sprites... it would be much appreciated...
****Another Update****
@ Midnight - Thank you for the compliment...
More sprites have been completed... the set is coming along fine...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v304/ ... Side-1.gif[/IMG]
A revised edited version of the character drawing his sword...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v304/ ... e-Side.gif[/IMG]
A side view battle stance...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v304/ ... Stance.gif[/IMG]
A front view battle stance...
Once again, please give critiques... any words will help me improve upon my sprites... i'm trying to get better...
@ Midnight - Thank you for the compliment...
More sprites have been completed... the set is coming along fine...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v304/ ... Side-1.gif[/IMG]
A revised edited version of the character drawing his sword...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v304/ ... e-Side.gif[/IMG]
A side view battle stance...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v304/ ... Stance.gif[/IMG]
A front view battle stance...
Once again, please give critiques... any words will help me improve upon my sprites... i'm trying to get better...
The Cry of Fallen Angels
Member
Let's see, you asked bit of feedback right? Bit late, but here goes;
Well, let's see, the one sitting on an edge is a good idea, but remember, his lower leg can't move like that if his upper leg is in that position. And it looks a bit too long.
The hitting on the hat can do without the circle (really, it looks amateuristic on such a little template)
The drawing weapon one, well, try to see where the weapon is before you draw it, try doing it with a sprited weapon. A simple stick to prevent problems.
His chest till his feet is a straight line, change that, add more shape to the body. I know 1 pixel will make the whole sprite look different, because of it's size but at least change the rear leg.
The sideview battle stance, well, what the hell is he doing with his arm? Also, try to make it look more as a looping motion, instead of making it so schocky. Meaning let it move less.
Last one makes it a little hard to imagine for me what's it exactly doing, at first I thought it was doing excersices. Pay attention to what positions you bring his parts of his body in, and think if that is possible for a human being or not, try it yourself for example.
Well, I hoped that helped a bit.
Well, let's see, the one sitting on an edge is a good idea, but remember, his lower leg can't move like that if his upper leg is in that position. And it looks a bit too long.
The hitting on the hat can do without the circle (really, it looks amateuristic on such a little template)
The drawing weapon one, well, try to see where the weapon is before you draw it, try doing it with a sprited weapon. A simple stick to prevent problems.
His chest till his feet is a straight line, change that, add more shape to the body. I know 1 pixel will make the whole sprite look different, because of it's size but at least change the rear leg.
The sideview battle stance, well, what the hell is he doing with his arm? Also, try to make it look more as a looping motion, instead of making it so schocky. Meaning let it move less.
Last one makes it a little hard to imagine for me what's it exactly doing, at first I thought it was doing excersices. Pay attention to what positions you bring his parts of his body in, and think if that is possible for a human being or not, try it yourself for example.
Well, I hoped that helped a bit.
::: Update December 4th, 2006:::
I begin this transmission with a "What happened to my Post..."... It's cold here... very cold... frigid even... but i've done some work that i cannot show yet... (ragnarok) and i've done this piece... A friend of mines told me that my characters don't look grown enough... so i had to do at least one with him being grown and around his age (making a change from my style... huh). So this is a portrait of Joseph... I also used a new coloring tecnique that i wasn't too fond of... but i got a chance to work with my good friend, Wacom again... and that inspired the new coloring style... also please comment on the banner... i feel it's missing something but i don't know what... (I want to get into banner creation also... ':| )
:: Old Stuff that could always use a critique ::
:: New and more Current stuff that needs commenting on ::
Please Leave a Comment i appreciate it...
I begin this transmission with a "What happened to my Post...
"... It's cold here... very cold... frigid even... but i've done some work that i cannot show yet... (ragnarok) and i've done this piece... A friend of mines told me that my characters don't look grown enough... so i had to do at least one with him being grown and around his age (making a change from my style... huh). So this is a portrait of Joseph... I also used a new coloring tecnique that i wasn't too fond of... but i got a chance to work with my good friend, Wacom again... and that inspired the new coloring style... also please comment on the banner... i feel it's missing something but i don't know what... (I want to get into banner creation also... ':| ):: Old Stuff that could always use a critique ::
:: New and more Current stuff that needs commenting on ::
Please Leave a Comment i appreciate it...
OK... I'll admit i've been holding out on everyone on the RAGNAROK project... but i was going to release this later... Well... I decided that now is a good time as any to release this stuff... SOoO without further ado... Samurai Ragnarok stuff...(and part of the reason i've been absent...)...
-The Wall Papers-
-The GIRLS-
This wallpaper is in the design of Kairi, the main hero's love interest. However she's accompanied by the other two females you gain later in the party, Katilena and Kairi.
-Mirage-
This wallpaper shows the evolution of Mirage, from her beginning sketch 2 years ago back when it was called Samurai Story. She's recieved quite a facelift since then...
-Hyotachi-
The Arrogant bad boy himself sports his traditional colors as he stares a hole through the competition.
-Mikaboshi-
This mysterious warrior is one of the antagonist of Samurai Ragnarok. complete with moves to easily devestate his competition, Mikaboshi has already claimed the hearts of a few members within the forums...
-Banners-
This is a banner version of the Samurai Ragnarok Girls wallpaper...
This is the official heaven's cloud banner...
This is Mikaboshi's banner... complete with the Samurai Ragnarok logo... AND ANIMATED...
I hope you all enjoy the work that i've done... I guess this is my way of saying MERRY CHRISTMAS... but i have to hurry to work... So Enjoy... and please Leave comments... it lets me know my art is appreciated...
::End Transmission::
Gives off a Samurai Champloo meets Breath of Fire feel with the art style. Love it. http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/1462 ... on2bc8.png[/img]
Sir Pimpalot
Member
I really like the first picture alot...if you'd get rid of that white outline. The styles great, I like the sprites and other pictures too.
:: Begin Transmission ::
I have a Request... in my own thread i know... We have this logo right... well... Seems that we can't get a idea for a logo out for Heaven's Cloud OR Samurai Ragnarok... and so i've decided to turn to the forum for Assistance...
If you can offer help... Advice... assistance... Any of the 3 would be grand...:yes: Thank YOu...
I have a Request... in my own thread i know... We have this logo right... well... Seems that we can't get a idea for a logo out for Heaven's Cloud OR Samurai Ragnarok... and so i've decided to turn to the forum for Assistance...
If you can offer help... Advice... assistance... Any of the 3 would be grand...:yes: Thank YOu...
CrowleyIsm
Member
Darksydaz;120524 said:
Make that one more who's heart has been stolen... I absolutely ADORE this character, and I barely even know him.
The Cry of Fallen Angels
Member
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v304/DarkSyDaZ/Logo.gif
That one.
Bit graffiti-ish wich may not fit the mood of the game, but it beats the other 2 with ease. It does fit in quite well with the profile pic as well.
That one.
Bit graffiti-ish wich may not fit the mood of the game, but it beats the other 2 with ease. It does fit in quite well with the profile pic as well.
CrowleyIsm
Member
Ya know....the more I look at Mikaboshi, the more I'm reminded of Haseo from .hack//G.U. .....maybe that's why i like him so much LOL Oh,a nd the third logo is my personal fav. The lettering is brilliant and reminds me of a Samauri-ish type thing, so yeah. The first one is alright too, except it just looks like you spattered some brushing and threw together some words... The second ones lettering I don't really like...it's not very catchy. So yeah, third one is my fav. I even like the gradient.