coyotecraft":489r4r4t said:
Yeat's also got this thing with gyers. Spiraling cones. Which could lend itself to a drill, or spear. I keep asking myself if Sven had a weapon, what would it be? But I mean, Pep can use just about any weapon, and his Alter Ego can shoot lightning. The Cookiedoe's devil gene manifesting makings them a "Lightning Anomaly"
Although Sven could just as easily have inherited an angel gene, like his mother. I'm kinda of teasing the idea that Sven in an alternate timeline has activated his angel gene. Making him a catalyst for this story. But because I don't know what Biz is doing with Sven in Fantasia, I'm leaving it open ended. IMO the best fanfic is one that could pass for canon.
I can help out here. Sven doesn't really excel anymore in Fantasia, as the story doesn't really focus on him. He; happy to just smoke while everyone else does the work. He's not a fighter. As for what weapon he'd use- I typically give people with no fighting prowess but a kind or helpful spirit a book, much alike how scholars work in FFXIV. This could factor in well since Scholars have a minion, and Sven's bat friend you're inventing could certainly tie that together. If i did have to choose a weapon though it'd likely be a rapier or a more elegant weapon, Sven isn't the sort who'd like using a gun.
He alike Pep (same litter) would possess both an angel and devil gene, he seldom uses them, in fact it's likely he never unlocked them- but he does definitely take more after his mother, his fur isn't the atrociously bright red his brother and father's is, he seldom drinks red cordial (only enough to get a partial hue) and alike Svoli, he's quite patient, smart and observant, while Pep and Sped are like powerhouses of reckless energy. His name is also very similar to his mothers, starting with the same 'Sv' hers and her grandmother Svana does.
Svoli is a russian blue like her mother, while Sven is a mix of Russian Blue and Silver Tabby. (what Pep and his father are.)
coyotecraft":489r4r4t said:
Something else I came across, there's this Norse rune called a Svefnthorn. Sven. Svefn. Literally a sleep thorn. Kinda of a handy connection if I were to use it. It's been suggested that the rune actually represents a spindle and possibly connected to the origins of Sleeping Beauty. I can see a loose connection between spinning yarn and counting sheep to fall asleep.
Someone stuck with a sleepthorn will stay asleep until it's plucked out. Oh man, the older telling of Sleeping Beauty is messed up. Like, the prince's kiss doesn't wake her up. He knocks her up and leaves. Nine months later a baby pops out and sucks the sleep thorn out of her finger, waking her up.
My my, that is dark, but it leeds well to the dream metaphor you're working on.
coyotecraft":489r4r4t said:
Anyways, back to the Svefnthorn. There's variations of it. Some people describe them as "harpoons". Which considering Svoli's light spears would be - what's a good word, conducive? I'm pretty sure they're spindles though. Working needles into Sven's design wouldn't be too hard. My early musing imagined something special about his whiskers. And even as a "lightning anomaly" I can see him replacing his cigarette with a pick. Some inspiration is coming from Larxene from KH. In the original GBA version of Chain of Memories I always thought her weapons were needles. But they're actually throwing knives.
Ah yes, it's a pretty common weapon in japanese fiction, the finger-spaced throwing knifes. Sakuya (Touhou project) and several other characters use them.
This does bring to mind Esperia's needlegun she used in her life as "The Widowmaker", she'd kill men doing indecent things, and due to her background of engineering, bio-engineering and chemistry, she had a needle gun hidden under her sleeve that would fire with a twitch of her thumb- a needle into the target coated in a paralysis poison which would render the target unable to move for 10 minutes after which they would die due to their organs not being able to function and their heart stops beating.
But that as an aside- it's a sound idea.
coyotecraft":489r4r4t said:
Pep and Sven's grandmother is Lady Tiramisa. But it's a secret as to who their grandfather is. In a flashback Tiramisa is talking to the other royalty about her plan to produce heirs strong enough to overthrow Naxon's Empire. I like to think Sven manifested that destiny without realizing it.
The only other cat in that flashback is a one-eyed guard. He enter from the left. Tiramisa tells him and the others to retreat. He turns around, and briefly we can see his one good eye is blue. Sped, Pep and Sven's father, is blindfolded because Esperia plucked his eyes out. But it's mention in passing that Sped had blue eyes.
Is that reaching? Maybe I'm giving Biz too much credit.
Nah, he's no one. Nothing. Tiramisa doesn't like to talk about her late partner, if you recall Tiramisa mentioned that if one with a devil gene procreates with one who doesn't, they will die. (something she had to learn the hard way) Sped and Svoli were lucky as one had a devil gene and the other an angel gene. Tiramisa's late spouse wasn't so lucky. Only Tiramisa knows who it was, and she'd never tell. I myself don't even know.
coyotecraft":489r4r4t said:
I'm not sure where they got the last name Cookiedoe from.
Tiramisa had a habit of eating cookies before they were cooked when she was young, and when she made her plans she had to change her last name, and recalling that, she chose that as a surname, changing 'dough' to 'doe' to avoid it looking fake. Tiramisa's royal name has been lost to time and she is the only one who knows it beyond her original complacency.
coyotecraft":489r4r4t said:
I googled Tiramisa to see what's in the name. But got Tiramisu, a "cheer me up" dessert from tirami su di morale. It's made with cookies or "Savoiardi".
I'm looking for a good name. Just Tirami translates to "pull me". I want to derive a romantic complimentary name. Maybe "hold me back" "Hold me" Reggimi. Or something sweet like "Yours forever" tuo per sempre; Tuoper? Tupper? Tupperware.
That'd be cute. Preserve the queen!
I mean to be fair, being Tiramisu Cake mix essentially is also cute. Tiramisa is also generally not much of a romantic. She is defined by her independence.
Just for the cute factor, here's Tiramisa eating Tiramisu (it was a fan request)
coyotecraft":489r4r4t said:
No. That's not right. Whoever he is potentially took her cherry.
Jack of Hearts stole her tarts. Hmm, I had this card motif going in my original draft. Not really a motif, more of a lead into sexual innuendo.
Trust you to go try and sexualize cats. :P (to be fair I do this as well, albeit at only a mildly suggestive level.)
coyotecraft":489r4r4t said:
Did you know the playing-card face cards are named after historical figures? King of Diamonds is Julius Caesar, 'cause his back is turned. Looks like the Jack of Hearts is La Hire, aka Étienne de Vignolles from the Hundred Year War. His nick name, La Hire, could be from Hedgehog hérisson, he was a prick I guess. Nah.
Ooo, but Jack of Diamonds is Hector from the Trojan war. Hector meaning "to hold fast". Yesss, that fits into my theme.
I think you're being even more autistic about these things than I am. Though interestingly if you look at the OST some characters are a suit and rank. Kara is the King of Clubs, Svoli is the Ace of Hearts, Sven is the Jack of Diamonds and Nola is the Queen of Spades. Pep is the Joker and Sped is a Wildcard.
coyotecraft":489r4r4t said:
Mmm, I love correspondences. Thank you wikipedia. Not exactly a "hanged man" but when he was defeated they pulled him behind a chariot by the heels. Even though he was dead the gods had preserved Hector's body. And he never gave up fighting even though he knew Troy and his house was doomed.
How fitting that Sven who is in canon the Jack of Diamonds, have such a fitting historical figure attribution.
coyotecraft":489r4r4t said:
Sven never meets Tiramisa or learns about his secret lineage. But because this story exists in a dream blended with Esperia's memories, I could make Tiramisa actual Tiramisu, in an ice cream candy kingdom that's being devoured by dread pigs. Wait no, not dread. Spread. I could probably transition from cards spread to food spread somehow.
Lmao go nuts. Dread comes in many forms. You've got the weird eldritch pig monsters, the dread thanes, the dreadcasters, the dreadromancers, etc. There's also a bunch of other 'dread' beings which were planned but didn't make the cut. See this document for a bunch of silly shit me and my brainstorming colleagues contributed.
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1670UssqdCwW2arUBAQxJ7q0Lu61hhhO1tcgyHyHJGs0/edit?usp=sharing
And here's where I explain the different enemy types.
https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1kxxZ2svdCVCM1A3byL86J8sy9COV-JDvW9qtzSImn3M/edit?usp=sharing
Most of this was proposed for unity, though admittedly would still be possible in RPGmaker, I'd just have to hire a really competent coder.
Progress report, you ask? Very well!
Biz
I haven't done a whole lot, seeing as most of my work is done until I get more resources. HOWEVER, I did make some dope promotional posters.
As you can glean from this image. the release date for Demo 2 is 10/10/19, a little over a month from now. Story trailer coming soon.
Xiie
The final Sprite is complete!
M.F. Lazarus takes stage.
Xiie has also been working on some of the unique poses. For example: Kara kneeling.
Making kara's spriteset entirely complete.
We also have Svoli launching her spear. She hasn't finished this yet but here's a WIP.
The prior version she forgot to add the hood, WOOPS!
I'm currently cutting down on the massive amounts of dialogue. Making use of the maximum 20-dialogue boxes per scene rule you discovered, Coyote. And fixing up a few disconcerting time-flawed discoveries.