Thank you guys...yeah I'm going to fix that hole glitch RIGHT NOW cuz people have told me before but I never got around to it lolz.
.....K it's fixed haha.
Okay guys, I think I mentioned before that I didn't like the beginning of the game, as well as the backstories of the two main characters...particularly Kain. Don't worry, I knew that Kain's story was silly and cliche...I just wanted to get a demo out so I was just like "WHATEVZ!!" haha.
Okay...well I'm gonna bounce some general ideas off you guys here and let me know what you think. I wanted to just surprise everyone with the next demo with the new stories...but I want to get it final in the next one so I'm gonna do some "beta testing" here.
Kain
Kain has committed a horrible crime...like maybe he murdered someone. Probably murdered someone in a rage over a girl. Probably a girl who will be a romance for Kain throughout the game or something (none of the characters we've already met).
He is killed for the crime...or maybe he dies as he does it. He is offered a second chance in the "underworld" by some god...maybe this god is one of the Guardian Spirits...perhaps it's the Guardian Spirit of the underworld and a god of chance and gambling...not an evil one like Dietra, just like a....I dunno, gambler "toy-with-people's-lives" type of being, you know?
Kain's whole questing thing will be implemented into the story this time...I think I can do it lol *sweats*. His part of the deal is that he has to do good deeds for people...and that is why he uses this quest log or whatever it is to help people. And of course along the way he will become a better person because of doing these good deeds, blah blah blah, you know.
I'm just having some trouble with all the finer details...but I have some ideas floating around. Here are the main things floating around for Kain's story:
-A second chance
-A romance
-Doing good deeds for SOME reason (doesn't really want to but has to)
-All this somehow connects with Kain helping Maria...I have a lot of ideas floating around
Maria
I haven't thought about Maria's story that much...it's really Kain's story that needed to be...well...completely torn down and built from the ground up lol.
I think that maybe she will start very high up in the Covenant...like probably at least serving in the main church in the "Covenant City" or whatever. Then she will probably leave on her own will because maybe she is starting to see some corruption or something.
I dunno...there will just be a lot more time before she meets SAVIOR I would imagine. A lot more of her trying to figure things out on her own as opposed to just blatantly being told and led by the hand so early on by SAVIOR. I didn't like that very much.
Ooookay just tell me what you guys think ^o^