Skyla Doragono
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Gaaaaah...! If you're going to use Shakespearian language, use it right. >:|
Luminier":xxdovrgh said:I-I'm sorry to say, but, that is perhaps the most godawful dialogue I've ever seen, this side of... Well, it's pretty much the worst dialogue I've ever seen. As a rule of thumb, you should remember to use the whole "thee thou thy" speak sparingly... By which I mean not at all. It's so incredibly hokey that it will only serve to make whatever scene it's used in cheesy beyond belief. But, if you must, at least use it right, which you have not done here.
(btw ghost is a silly name for serious things, not that thats a bad thing)
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d136/wes4mu089/4.jpg
Final Griever":15y1evlh said:([.img]and[./img] somehow doesn't work...)
Hmm... I reckon you need to edit the posts so that they look like they're in the water. Much like the posts on the bridge... which I've just noticed you've put on land.Dark_Cover":2sn855sv said:Hey, I decided to post a screenie from my game
http://i454.photobucket.com/albums/qq262/Dark_Symphony/Screen_DS_001.png
Dark_Cover":3gsnmh89 said:Hey, I decided to post a screenie from my game
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