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Mustardy85
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I got alot of bad feedback on this map, so I decided to make some changes...
Before :
http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg88 ... ning-1.jpg[/img]
After :
http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg88 ... vement.jpg[/img]
Any Improvement?
Before :
http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg88 ... ning-1.jpg[/img]
After :
http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg88 ... vement.jpg[/img]
Any Improvement?
Skyla Doragono
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It's much more varied, although the bare trees don't make much sense to me. :x
Also, the junk around the large tree is clustered together and looks like crap.
Also, the junk around the large tree is clustered together and looks like crap.
GreenGreen
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In your first pic, a few of your trees appear to be floating over water. One of your logs seems to be stuck to a tree(1st pic) And all of the random crap that you put around it needs to go.
Mustardy:
I don't really see anything that bothersome from the first screenshot, minus the trees in the river. The "After" ones, though; the flower-cluster feels rather unnatural. If it were pixel-by-pixel randomly placed flower cluster, then it would probably be nice, but the square-by-square formation feels a bit off. The colour of the yellow-ish trees are also a bit odd.
But besides the flower cluster thing, you seem to have a good sense of nature. It's easy to fix a few habits, but hard to gain a feel for it; so you're definitely on the right track! :smile:
I don't really see anything that bothersome from the first screenshot, minus the trees in the river. The "After" ones, though; the flower-cluster feels rather unnatural. If it were pixel-by-pixel randomly placed flower cluster, then it would probably be nice, but the square-by-square formation feels a bit off. The colour of the yellow-ish trees are also a bit odd.
But besides the flower cluster thing, you seem to have a good sense of nature. It's easy to fix a few habits, but hard to gain a feel for it; so you're definitely on the right track! :smile:
Skyla Doragono
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...
Medieval characters...
...with sub machine guns...
...
How to put this nicely...
Medieval characters...
...with sub machine guns...
...
How to put this nicely...
NO
Unless it's some futuristic evil corporation that went back in time in order to sell advance weaponry to surpress a rebellion and put the ancestor of the president of said futuristic corporation on the throne... that's possible!
On another related topic, you should move those dead people away from the edges of the bridge, it looks weird the way it is now.
On another related topic, you should move those dead people away from the edges of the bridge, it looks weird the way it is now.
Menu for our VX game (secret~)
Feedback would really be appreciated.
Faces and Fonts are placeholder.
http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/3905/sodmenuvariantgatesdifdtg2.png[/img] <-- Old one
http://img58.imageshack.us/img58/5891/s ... tesmj0.png[/img]
http://img93.imageshack.us/img93/2462/i ... tesjh2.png[/img]
http://img70.imageshack.us/img70/7576/s ... atena0.png[/img]
http://img58.imageshack.us/img58/5891/s ... tesmj0.png[/img]
http://img93.imageshack.us/img93/2462/i ... tesjh2.png[/img]
http://img70.imageshack.us/img70/7576/s ... atena0.png[/img]
Feedback would really be appreciated.
Faces and Fonts are placeholder.
I think i might post my first house created with RMXP (tileset by the Inquisitor)
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/2138 ... ot1de5.png[/img]
EDIT:
@Ynlraey:
Awesome, just awesome.
Nice Job :thumb:
@Mustardy:
If you wanna have more detailed maps or 'living' maps put flying butterflies on the map it looks very cute.
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/2138 ... ot1de5.png[/img]
EDIT:
@Ynlraey:
Awesome, just awesome.
Nice Job :thumb:
@Mustardy:
If you wanna have more detailed maps or 'living' maps put flying butterflies on the map it looks very cute.
bit bland imo, Inq made the set to include doorframes in that set to make doors look a bit less plastered-on, the house shape itself is a bit boring and you could possibly make use of some of the ivy he put in the set, strangely it doesn't tend to get repetitive even if you do overuse it, in my opinion anyway. The fog doesn't really add much to the map either, and the cliff is pretty straight, it's a tricky set to use (though undeniably a great one) and you seem to be getting to grips with how to put things together with it which a lot of people can't do so keep on going with it, I'd like to see more projects made with his set
I suppose I'm posting this screen both as a way of example and because I feel like like posting a screen, not that I consider it perfect by any means! Very old, very unfinished portion of a city wip, none of the events are in place obviously hence the broken "turret" area and lack of doors/lighting etc
http://i35.tinypic.com/15pl3s9.png[/img]
ynlraey that's sweet as fuck, I love the aesthetic quirks that scripts give much more than custom systems, mainly because you're more likely to see a finished project with awesome looking menus than one with a custom battle system or whatever
I suppose I'm posting this screen both as a way of example and because I feel like like posting a screen, not that I consider it perfect by any means! Very old, very unfinished portion of a city wip, none of the events are in place obviously hence the broken "turret" area and lack of doors/lighting etc
http://i35.tinypic.com/15pl3s9.png[/img]
ynlraey that's sweet as fuck, I love the aesthetic quirks that scripts give much more than custom systems, mainly because you're more likely to see a finished project with awesome looking menus than one with a custom battle system or whatever
Atemu":19ga8h23 said:
HAY THANKS 4 TEH FEEDBAKCS ATEMU
...jeez, you don't have to be such a douche about it. Maybe it would be nice if you told me a place where I could get some futuristic characters to fix this problem...?
Doctor":19ga8h23 said:
Yeah, you're right, it does kinda look weird, thanks for pointing that out, I'll fix it up. :thumb:
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