@ Erichermit: That's a really big improvement. I would tone down the fog a bit. It's a nice addition but I think it's a bit too imposing. It's kinda hard to see what's going on.
@ Wyatt: The trees need to more dense. They aren't close together enough to be what I'd call a forest. Atm, it just looks like a field with lots of trees. Bring them all closer together. Try looking at Lisker's map up the page to get a better idea of what I mean.
Here's another part of my worldmap. This area is Eastwards of the previous world map I posted. The reason I didn't join the two up, is because there is a lot of land in between the two parts that doesn't appear in the chapter I'm currently working on.
This area shows Ventoinne Port (which is a bit of land the sticks out the furthest into the Desuna Fog, a very treacherous and dangerous part of the sea, all the ships have to dance around it to get to their loacations. It's colloquial name is the "X-Zone"), and the land between there and the Armadro Fort. The Armadro Pirates hang out in there, and it's your job to go and prove they're up to no good.
Anyway, here it is;
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