The Screenshot Thread

[Myownfriend]

lol OK but still the map in the back I made in 2 mins for a demo.

 

[Nin]

Actually, an ideal way to develop a game is to create the world in which your story takes place first. It isn't ass backwards, but it isn't completely right either.

I just said he should work on his mapping if he wants a successful complete game. Mapping is something you'll be seeing throughout the whole game.

EDIT: Alright, understood numbnuts

 

[Mr.Mo]

This is for a side project I'm working on. Feel free to judge the map as well as the dioluge.
http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/8983/screen1ji8.png[/img]

 

[Nin]

The tall grass, cliffs, and water are way too squared out to be natural. Otherwise, nice job.

Not much to comment on the dialouge since I have no idea what's behind it.

 

[Cygnea]

@Mr. Mo: The square water is a bit strange, but not enough for me to complain about. The straight edge of the tall grass could be changed, and the dialouge should flow more naturally; right now it just seems forced and a bit awkward. And I think 'its' should be 'it's'. Those two always confuse me, though, so I'm entirely sure.

Spoiler: Rough Draft of Galian Headquarters: South Division

http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/5987/fortza6.png[/IMG]

The same picture I posted earlier today, but a little more developed. The building to the lower left is shorter than the wall, which is why they're two separate pieces. The pathway is just a placeholder (I'm trying to think of a way to make it look more natural) and the landscape mapping isn't finished. So far I have the following areas planned:

• Stable
• Blacksmith
• Barracks
• Infirmary
• Offices
• Kitchen, etc.
• Storage
• Training area

Any idea of what else to add would be helpful.

 

[Mr.Mo]

The convo is as(changed it);

s-"Sir, the french are near."
m-"I see..."
s-"We are cornered sir."
m-"I'm aware of that. Tell the men to be ready
on sun rise, I have a plan."
Dialogue is not my strongest point, I think its the weakest lol. I'm just a scripter...
btw, how does the water look now?
http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/4883/screen1lf8.png[/img]

 

[Nin]

Looks a bit better, but still needs some work. Also, it's: "They are moving faster than I thought."

You could have stuck with the regular watertile, just made the body of water more curvy/jagged and not just a big square.

 

[JD_Slasha]

That map is very regular and symetrical for a natural area. For the pillars and road it's fine, but the trees and rocks just look odd.

Oh I forgot to say ignore the mapping.. ':| I was just trying to see how the tileset looked... it does look awkward tho..

 

[Impreza]

I'm not sure about this map so,please
comment and critique.

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/2608/mymapnl6.png[/IMG]

 

[syvkal]

Well first of all the grass cuts of by the top dead tree and by the water on the waterfall, the edge stones cut off on the adjoining cliffs and the water fall needs to be brung back one and edited so it has that same rock as the cliffs.


Apart from that I think it looks quite good so far.

 

[The Man]

I'm still practicing mapping for my project. Any comments about this one?
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k13/t ... REENYa.png[/IMG]

 

[Sapphire]

The Cliffs are too straight. There are no flowers or objects. add some more ;D
And Arshes is a misfit.:D

 

[Despain v.1]

Those look like Big Billy graphics. And that's not a compliment.

 

[Aran]

Despain, I like the way you put that. And I agree....

 

[Despain v.1]

thanks aran ^_^

 

[ryanwh]

The resolutions dont match. Shrinking resolutions down is one thing, intermixing that with resolutions made bigger is a major nono. It creates a hodgepodgey "amature" effect.

 

[Midnight]

heres a screenshot of my message system i made for my new game i'm making
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/6097 ... sysba4.png[/IMG]
(the box on the far right is for the face :P)
so far thats the only thing done for my new game so hopefully its good so far .(i started my new game last night at 9 or 10pm so i din't work on it a lot)

 

[Ellie]

That's actually pretty sweet.

 

[Midnight]

thx right now i'm going to think of a hud and then make it and sprite my character i drew or if i can't request it.

 

[Stupid Penguin]

heres a screenshot of my message system i made for my new game i'm making
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/6097 ... sysba4.png[/IMG]
(the box on the far right is for the face :P)
so far thats the only thing done for my new game so hopefully its good so far .(i started my new game last night at 9 or 10pm so i din't work on it a lot)

That looks pretty cool.
Very similar and yet... different!