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(RMVX) Moonlight Abyss

CottonSlug":3ubwd1pc said:
If she falls in love with him when she brings him home, it's the Florence Nightingale Effect, watch Back To The Future for crying out loud.

Claire isn't the one who brought him home. It's her mother that did it. Her mother didn't fall in love with Freyhart (Not like Marty McFly's).
Also, Claire's love didn't sprang up unnaturally nor psychologically. Claire fell in love with him as he spent days with her when they were young. So I think it's not Florence Nightingale Effect.

And for the term harem, it wasn't really familiar to me so... I didn't know it's similar to bishoujo.

Brandonn":3ubwd1pc said:
The Moon cannot give light without the sun...

Exactly. But the sun can give light even without the moon. And I know that the sun is also a star but... The stars that disappeared with the moon which I mention were stars that are seen during the night.

I updated a few things. Sorry it took me awhile just for these. I had to make a long pause upon continuing this proj. I'm still waiting for custom scripts that I need to add for this game...

And also, I really need help. I am working alone and won't be able to finish this. I would like to organize a team/group but I don't think anyone has the time for it...

EDIT: Made a post on the Recruitment and Classifieds area.
 
Man you are taking a beating....Well just to give some support ill add in my 75 cents.....Nice game....

The romance addition always makes a game worth playing. Its how the romance branches off that makes it "Real" Romance, it cant just happen, make sure you're very subtle in the start, and never jump to far ahead of what last happened.

Just lending a helping hand, keep up the work I wana see this finished.
 
BlueNoob":x0zbd3qg said:
Man you are taking a beating....Well just to give some support ill add in my 75 cents.....Nice game....

The romance addition always makes a game worth playing. Its how the romance branches off that makes it "Real" Romance, it cant just happen, make sure you're very subtle in the start, and never jump to far ahead of what last happened.


Just lending a helping hand, keep up the work I wana see this finished.

Thanks. I'm glad to hear that. I'll try my best.

EDIT: Hey people, just wondering, do you think I should switch to RMXP instead? Because right now, RMVX has limited scripts and resources... I really somehow can't progress...
Also, should I really revamp my story? I have a slight idea on how I'm gonna change it (or I can just drop this project and start a new one).
 
i think people are raggin' this game because it looks better then theres.

i love the game, and especially the character concepts.

this may come as a surprise, but theres such thing as incest. Shocker!!!! and it does happen. and the fact that its a obsticle they have to overcome is pretty good.

[edit] I just remembered about a story a read awhile ago , and the name escapes me but it was about Orestes, A boy who when he was born to kill his father and bone his mother, so they abruptly tryed to kill him. problems is , they didn't and he grew up to do the very exact thing. Either that or Oedipus, i pretty sure it was the story of Orestes tho.

as for that loser being offended (i'm not even gonna bother looking for his name). do you think this is offensive? http://farm1.static.flickr.com/5/6566308_70169157ef.jpg[/img]

or this ?
http://www.sullivan-county.com/images1/islam_hate.gif[/img]

Christians are the most offensive, hateful creatures (ironically) created by god.

so shove your religious opinions in your ass so when your priest sticks is meat pole in you, you can have an intelligent conversation. (and that isn't just angry-banter, try watchin' the history channel, as of 2004 , documents are surfacing witch proves convincingly that jesus was homosexual.)

sorry turn this into religious debate but his comment offend me. none the less this so far is 1 of the only 2 games i'm looking forward too. the other is the episilon game( i believe thats the name)
 
HydraulicSandwich":3cgpr7ip said:
i think people are raggin' this game because it looks better then theres.

i love the game, and especially the character concepts.

this may come as a surprise, but theres such thing as incest. Shocker!!!! and it does happen. and the fact that its a obsticle they have to overcome is pretty good.

[edit] I just remembered about a story a read awhile ago , and the name escapes me but it was about Orestes, A boy who when he was born to kill his father and bone his mother, so they abruptly tryed to kill him. problems is , they didn't and he grew up to do the very exact thing. Either that or Oedipus, i pretty sure it was the story of Orestes tho.
It's Oedipus, and you shouldn't be an inflammatory cockgoblin by shitting up this thread with a debate that's over.
 
Every off-topic negative comment is a free bump. ;3

The story concept is actually quite original and definitely has some potential. The romance will also add something to the project if handled well. I can imagine rivalry and catfights erupting, which could be funny.

This project certainly looks interesting, but a couple of mapping examples would be nice next time you decide to update. :smile:
 
Oh now I'm really confused.... Cause lately I've been thinking of revamping it... Probably less girls and diff main character.... Now I'm not sure.... And one more thing, should I use RMXP instead of VX? Please I need help...
 
Don't step back from your Idea. You have it all planed, so why should you change it? I don't see the sense in that...
I quite like the idea of choosing who will be Freyharts loveinterest. It gives people who want a specific shiping the possibility to make it true. And thats for every shipping. So keep up the good work.
 
Freyhart":5bgt1tmd said:
Oh now I'm really confused.... Cause lately I've been thinking of revamping it... Probably less girls and diff main character.... Now I'm not sure.... And one more thing, should I use RMXP instead of VX? Please I need help...

Stick to VX, and stick with the story you like. If you want to revamp, do it, but don't revamp because people are crying about your story.
 
i would say go continue using VX,
lets make a great game in VX
and let others know that VX is not actually that kind of trash...

Im gonna use VX on Developing My Game : Rebellion Gear(See my Banner)
So lets make a best result on making the game in VX

Keep It up man...
Im going to watch your project grows as i watch mine grows too xD
Norse Mythology Kinda involve in my Story though
but not actually 'Norse Mythology' itself just some names and refferals...
Like Goddess of Past, Present, Future(Urd,Verdandi,Skuld)
 
Hanzo Kimura":cy1f295o said:
i would say go continue using VX,
lets make a great game in VX
and let others know that VX is not actually that kind of trash...

Im gonna use VX on Developing My Game : Rebellion Gear(See my Banner)
So lets make a best result on making the game in VX

Keep It up man...
Im going to watch your project grows as i watch mine grows too xD
Norse Mythology Kinda involve in my Story though
but not actually 'Norse Mythology' itself just some names and refferals...
Like Goddess of Past, Present, Future(Urd,Verdandi,Skuld)

nice way of plugging your game.newb.

Venetia: Do a poll sometime. Ask who the forum generally thinks is more "newb"ish. You may not like the results.
 
HydraulicSandwich":3hs2dl8n said:
Hanzo Kimura":3hs2dl8n said:
i would say go continue using VX,
lets make a great game in VX
and let others know that VX is not actually that kind of trash...

Im gonna use VX on Developing My Game : Rebellion Gear(See my Banner)
So lets make a best result on making the game in VX

Keep It up man...
Im going to watch your project grows as i watch mine grows too xD
Norse Mythology Kinda involve in my Story though
but not actually 'Norse Mythology' itself just some names and refferals...
Like Goddess of Past, Present, Future(Urd,Verdandi,Skuld)

nice way of plugging your game.newb.
atleast you said "nice way" lol  :lol:

btw freyhart
i almost forgot i gave you the wrong feather on the logo xD
if you want the other feather just pm me ^^
*downloads the demo*
 
I am downloading this, too. I am going to ell you what I think later on. Have stuff to do after testing.

Edit: Hm... I dwnloaded it, but as soon as I start it, it closes right away...
 
hahahah i downloaded the first one already...
nice start i like it... when i got the brooch...
i was staring the screen for about 2 mins
noticing that i can move the character... lol
and realize that thats the demo for today xD
but yeah theres nothing much in it yet so i'll wait for the new one ^^
 
HydraulicSandwich":3hz2beli said:
Hanzo Kimura":3hz2beli said:
i would say go continue using VX,
lets make a great game in VX
and let others know that VX is not actually that kind of trash...

Im gonna use VX on Developing My Game : Rebellion Gear(See my Banner)
So lets make a best result on making the game in VX

Keep It up man...
Im going to watch your project grows as i watch mine grows too xD
Norse Mythology Kinda involve in my Story though
but not actually 'Norse Mythology' itself just some names and refferals...
Like Goddess of Past, Present, Future(Urd,Verdandi,Skuld)

nice way of plugging your game.newb.
Please step out of the sixth grade and join the rest of us. We can go on dates and drive cars.

Anyway. I'm loving the menus screen, but the background makes it look a little too busy. Try fewer lines.
 
Hanzo Kimura":3akxpyob said:
i would say go continue using VX,
lets make a great game in VX
and let others know that VX is not actually that kind of trash...

Im gonna use VX on Developing My Game : Rebellion Gear(See my Banner)
So lets make a best result on making the game in VX

Keep It up man...
Im going to watch your project grows as i watch mine grows too xD
Norse Mythology Kinda involve in my Story though
but not actually 'Norse Mythology' itself just some names and refferals...
Like Goddess of Past, Present, Future(Urd,Verdandi,Skuld)

VX has a better scripting system while XP has a a better mapping system. Thats about the only difference in the two besides VX using 3 frame sprites and XP uses 4 frame sprites, while with scripting you can give 3 frames to XP or 4 frames to VX, so there really isn't much of a difference the more you look at it. Both development programs are equally good in their own respects.

As for the game in general. I am Christian, but I don't give even a half penny's worth about the religious aspects in this game. A game is a game, it tells a story for what it is, I could care less what religious background a game uses as long as it is good and keeps my attention.

My game Kailis, uses its own form of religion, however I also have multiple gods in the game, however some are more in the background as opposed to being in the foreground and becoming a major part of the storyline right away.

Lots of games are cliche, that's because pretty much any idea has been thought of before or even done before, so really there is nothing "new" we can create, however we can fix and improve these "old" ideas and make them "more new". He is thinking outside the box with this game, however he is taking the traditional ideas of "sages, stars, icons" and making them into something that works with his game, it isn't like he is stealing the sages from the Legend of Zelda series and calling them his own by giving them a new look, different name, and quite possibly a different personality... yet they all do exactly the same thing they did before.

Legend of Zelda: Majora's Mask... great game y'all should go play it... It uses the fact the Moon is evil, and is coming to crash into Termina at the Clock Tower. You as Link, in a fantasy world, stop the Moon from doing just that, and infact not to ruin the game, they end up stopping the moon in its tracks, preventing its movement. It has been a while but I forget if they blow it up or not, however that is irrelevant.

The concept of using the Moon has been used before, using verses from the bible has been done before, using religions we have today in new concepts has been done before, the whole sages things have been done before... Only thing is, he is making these ideas new again by focusing them around a story of his game, which with a good bit of work from what I've seen, it is shaping up to be pretty good and could prove to be quite a fascinating game.

So with all that said, keep up the good work and don't let people with their hard-headed stereotypes, mindsets, and religious pig attitudes get you down... This game has much potential if you work at it well enough!
 

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