People are helping you. Not all helping is taking you by the hand and doing things for you. That's not going to help you improve.
People have given you some great advice here. Sure, they sound like a bunch of douchebags, but that's life. I look through this thread and hear a few things:
1) Read Tindy's mapping thread. That's something you need to do on your own, and believe me, it will help you out. I've read the thread more than once. It's a great tool. And it's free. You need to bend that thing over and take advantage of it like it's a cheap Bavarian hooker man.
2) Story needs improvement. Once again, that's something you're going to need to do on your own. This is YOUR game. If anyone comes in and writes your story for you, then it stops being YOUR game. And I'm sure you downloaded RMXP to make a game of your own, and you can't do that when your own ideas get thrown out the window. You're too anxious to make this thing. Take a step back and breathe. The game isn't going anywhere until you tell it to. So sit down and think about what you want to happen in your game. You've got a concept here, now build on it.
3) Characters need development. Sorry, but once again, this is on you. If it makes things easier, base your characters on the ideas made by big name companies. Nobody is going to bite your head of for making a character from an elite military group that ends up being a total emo (well, some people might, but who gives a shit?).
I understand that you're 12, but that's no excuse here. YOU downloaded RMXP. YOU posted your project here. People here don't sugarcoat things. You're going to hear it like it is. If you don't like it, well then, I'm sorry dude, but maybe this site isn't the place for you.
People aren't going to take you seriously if you just bitch and moan when you're given negative feedback though. Start off with your story. Get your storyline and characters ironed out and you'll have a strong base to start with. Then go and read Tindy's thread and get a couple of better screenshots up. Your project might not be perfect, but with those 3 things alone, you're going to be taken a lot more seriously than you are now.
People have given you some great advice here. Sure, they sound like a bunch of douchebags, but that's life. I look through this thread and hear a few things:
1) Read Tindy's mapping thread. That's something you need to do on your own, and believe me, it will help you out. I've read the thread more than once. It's a great tool. And it's free. You need to bend that thing over and take advantage of it like it's a cheap Bavarian hooker man.
2) Story needs improvement. Once again, that's something you're going to need to do on your own. This is YOUR game. If anyone comes in and writes your story for you, then it stops being YOUR game. And I'm sure you downloaded RMXP to make a game of your own, and you can't do that when your own ideas get thrown out the window. You're too anxious to make this thing. Take a step back and breathe. The game isn't going anywhere until you tell it to. So sit down and think about what you want to happen in your game. You've got a concept here, now build on it.
3) Characters need development. Sorry, but once again, this is on you. If it makes things easier, base your characters on the ideas made by big name companies. Nobody is going to bite your head of for making a character from an elite military group that ends up being a total emo (well, some people might, but who gives a shit?).
I understand that you're 12, but that's no excuse here. YOU downloaded RMXP. YOU posted your project here. People here don't sugarcoat things. You're going to hear it like it is. If you don't like it, well then, I'm sorry dude, but maybe this site isn't the place for you.
People aren't going to take you seriously if you just bitch and moan when you're given negative feedback though. Start off with your story. Get your storyline and characters ironed out and you'll have a strong base to start with. Then go and read Tindy's thread and get a couple of better screenshots up. Your project might not be perfect, but with those 3 things alone, you're going to be taken a lot more seriously than you are now.
