geredrethM (workshop)

[Despain]

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I think these are pretty damn good for now. Once I get the back view all set, I can ask Yeyinde to make the script for the extra frame and I'll test this puppy in RMXP.

 

[Skyla Doragono]

Aren't there already extra frame scripts for movement?

Also, I adore the front view. <3

 

[Despain]

Not the kind that I specifically want. Also CUSTOM MADE SCRIPT FOR THE GM TEMPLATE just sounds badass.

 

[Venetia]

I'm absolutely loving the hell out of the front view, but it looks like the side view has little midget arms tacked on. They're shaded well but the ball joint at the shoulder needs to be moved up and the crook of the elbow needs to be moved up, too. I also wouldn't complain if it was like 1 pix wider D:

 

[Luminier]

Yay. Now he has arms. Those arms aren't finalized, though, are they?

Take THAT other templates! You just got shot in the face. If I could sprite worth crap, I would definitely use this template, Des. :3

 

[Grathea]

Pretty much what Ven said - the arms are small and wimpy for his body.
Also, I think some more movement with the elbow joint wouldn't go amiss.


On an unrelated note, the HKCP is going to own your GeredrethRTP. It's pretty badass.

 

[___]

I think his feet are a little big, maybe by a pixel or two, personally.  Also the line across the top of his shoulder separating it from the neck seems out of place.  Also what the last two guys said.  The animation is pretty smooth though.

 

[Venetia]

On an unrelated note, the HKCP is going to own your GeredrethRTP. It's pretty badass.

oshit

XD~

yeah but srsly Des, you have some serious pixel talents.

 

[Despain]

I don't know, the gM RTP and the HKCP are very different projects. The gM RTP is going to be a well-organized project with specific goals and guidelines (we already have a secret forum) and the graphics will be made by a small group of two or three pixel artists to ensure that it stays consistent.

The HKCP is a good project, but I think that its goals and methods are going to be different than the gM RTP.

 

[___]

It's a showdown.  Despain will come dressed as Doc Holliday... the HKCP guys are the Cowboys.  Boy, if it's a contest of ugly I think the HKCP wins :/

 

[Venetia]

u're mean

I don't want this to be a competition dammit 

They're 2 totally different things.

Des has the skills to pay the bills, he's just paying different bills than me :D

 

[RavenTDA]

Hmm side view besides what was already said has a strange shoulder area. I don't understand that dark line going into the template and why the chest line goes all the way to the arm (or at least almost... off by 1pxl?) It really shouldn't go that far and I feel like anything other than the outline shouldn't be that darkest color. Also for consistancy issues... you seem to be developing a neck on the sideview but there is no neck on the front. While both look fine you'll need to think about what to go with.

 

[___]

u're mean

I don't want this to be a competition dammit 

They're 2 totally different things.

Des has the skills to pay the bills, he's just paying different bills than me :D

Have you seen Tombstone?  Those guys were yew-gly.  If I were you I'd go change Despain's avatar with yours and get on the right team :D

Seriously though I'm waiting with bated breath to see both groups' work.  I'm sure they'll be great, the HK work from last year was looking awesome till Tana & co seemed to lose interest.

 

[Danny]

Great improvement on the side view walking motion, I'd say he walks quite flawlessly now. I've came to like the new side view head shape alot, it's going to allow some great detail to be added. I've already started mucking around with the template, it's great for getting back to basics. Plenty of room to work with, even more than the previous geredreth which is saying something. Just about any pallette is working well with the template, it sounds daft, but I'm struggling to make my sprites not detailed.

 

[Despain]

http://bb.xieke.com/files/back.png[/img]

Man I actually forgot that I hadn't made the back view yet- here we go.

 

[Danny]

Sweet, all three poses look incredibly consistent. Nice new approach towards back view feet. It might just be me, but does the back view head seem to shrug down and forward a tad more than the other frames suggest. I think I may just be looking to much into the shading of the neck. Anyway there is some lovely detail throughout.

 

[Luthur]

I really love this! (Quickly makes mental note to change whole project graphics to this)

 

[WalkingAbomination]

The template looks great man, only thing that really bothers me is the side frame arm, would you mind if i put up a slight edit to the side frame arm? I left it in the same position i just added/took off some pixels here and there.

 

[Despain]

let me see :O

 

[WalkingAbomination]

I left it next to the original so you can see the changes, main changes where to the arm but i also took some pixels off of the legs, and added some to the back of the head.
http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u132 ... rmEdit.png

Edit: took some pixels off of the front leg, did not mess with the hind leg.