Genesis Saga

[G-man]

Yes so my storyplan worked, I realized that a 15 year old protagonist isn't ready to take on two governments so I scaled it down, but gameplay differ, although you gotta be pretty cruel to kill a kid. UPDATE!!!Thanks to Seph TDS Dynamic windowskins have come into play, basically skins that change based on your location,
i.e.If you get into a battle in water, it's going to be an aqua skin, if you brawl in a desert, Sandstone skin, got it? Pretty self explanatory.

 

[G-man]

Update I apologize if it doesn't qualify but check the first post major updatage, if that's even a word.

 

[Meticlan]

Update I apologize if it doesn't qualify but check the first post major updatage, if that's even a word.

I'm glad to see that your villain is starting to become more developed.

That was a major update, though - a big change from what you originally had.

There are several grammatical errors which make it difficult to understand certain pieces of text. Try re-vising your text and re-writing some of it.

I do think that the general order/presentation is a bit better, now. However, you should try not to break up thy bits of story and related text with explanations of your project/reasons for change.

Any comments you have, such as

READ THIS!!!I have dropped the North, South concept, realizing that it is impossible for a 15 year old boy to take on the government.

should either not be present, or placed at the very end of your project post.

Just after the "Features" header, the font changes to something quite bizarre and hard to read. Check your font tags and make certain that the entire post is using the same font.

Otherwise, I'm glad to see that you are making some progress!

 

[G-man]

:DThanks, I think you replied while I was updating again, but I'm still taking your comments into consideration, (Sigh) everyone has such a nice proj. layout, time for me to try my hand at Photoshop:yes:

 

[BunnyKinx]

well i was quite lucky...

Meticlan is on the team and made our layout.
There is one thing you have taken out that i liked...

THE 15 YEAR OLD!

I know you say its "impossible",,, but is it.

certainly makes it more interesting?

 

[G-man]

Lol I know I realized that and am currently aging the heros at a rapid pace, so expect to see everyone, Legal and ready to go into a bar in a few days.

 

[Meticlan]

Thanks, I think you replied while I was updating again

Yes, I did.

I like the new layout a lot better than the old one. It is a lot more orderly.

One thing: The dog's entry in the Heroes of Time section is in-between Tyson's data and his story. The dog's entry just needs to be moved down beneath Tyson's entry.

Also, adding some formatting to the character information sections would make it easier to read. Example:

Quote: "You Imbecile!"
Age: 18
Weapon: prefers classic pistols
Family:
Father: Albert Brief
Mother: Elly Brief
Grandfather: Maximus Brief
Story: Rich was raised in a millitant family, he had strict morals, which he still sticks to today, he joined the millitary to keep the family tradition intact, and also to get a shot at some Divine rebels, his eyes burned with anticipation as he accepted his post to the island city of Veronique. he usually is seen arguing with Ciara, he lets his temper get the best of him, and that becomes his undoing, maybe the lack of love from his parents make him like that?
Battleplan:Richard is the Brawn of the group, he can make quick enemy muck if you just give him the right two pistols, but based on his heavy armor he's slow to attack, and has abit of a hard time recovering from a status alignment.

 

[G-man]

Once again I run to the edit button.

 

[G-man]

Update The Genesis Saga now has forums up, now be warned, it's in it's earliest stages but I'm working on it as we speak, or as I post, or mayb- ah never mind just check it out. http://www.thegenesissaga.freeforums.org

 

[G-man]

bumpage check 1st post

 

[$t3v0]

This topic keeps getting me all excited as I think it's a discussion about the Sega Genesis

I prefer the project, though. Saying that, I'm ignorant when it comes to everything but the graphics and that's hardly the key element to making a good game :P

They are amazing, though.

 

[G-man]

Thanks As of now I'm wildly hopping from the team forums to here to check for any updates.

 

[nanao]

Good luck on both of ours. I'd wait for your release too. And you're further already on your project while I'm starting.

 

[G-man]

You should like this is strange, I must take my story 100% percent in a dif direction than yours, although yours seems more lighthearted

 

[nanao]

It is lighthearted and not the serious, dark ones. It for entertainment like the ol PS RPGs.

 

[G-man]

ah well this shall include funny scenes as well such as time traveling into a girls locker room in the future.

 

[nanao]

lol That's quite unique, and funny.

 

[G-man]

Hey I'm in dev? Yay!

 

[nanao]

Way to go! Congrats!

 

[G-man]

lol thanks, actually this gives both your and my game room to devlop, since we're now in two dif sections



EDIT: Also people in payback check out this cool project with a rather attractive lead.
http://www.rmxp.org/forums/showthread.php?p=254098#post254098