During that conversation at the beginning between the main character and his general, I'd suggest some music in the background.
The stamina system is friggin' cool
The three guards in the room where you meet the two jerks at the beginning don't say anything. Even a "... I'm busy" or such would help ^_^
The having to hit "C" to open doors is kind of annoying, but that's just me.
After the bandit attack. the door in the central room with the single guard standing next to it should have a text message saying "It's locked" or something similar.
A tone to indicate a level up would be nice, as well as what your "upgrades" were upon level up.
Another "just me" thing, but Faalene should be given the Lucky Coin skill when you get her :P
Wouldn't the bandits obey Faalene in Matriarch forest if she's their leader?
GREAT job of mapping Matriarch Forest ^_^ Also, those chests were SO badly needed, kudos for the excellent placement
A better placement of the "crafting explanation" would work nicely in the store in the town.
An option to cancel the boat trip to go and collect supplies would be nice.
Overall, a very nice game
I should've taken some time to hunt and level up, because I died once I got to the ice place (those wolves and harpies were just too strong) But I really didn't do all that much grinding.
Storyline is definitely good, only some minor issues with walking around in towns and such. Things like switching between maps, and the certain flowers not being able to be walked on was kind of annoying, but no big problems.
Only a few typos in the game.
7.5/10 up to the ice country ^_^