breeze-template (PA)

[green raven]

sorry to say this but it looks really bad, well everyone needs to start somewere.

http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s315 ... help-1.png[/IMG]
*helpimage*

1. you obviously can't choose your colours, they are far too bright and the shades and base colour look very similar. I suggest using pallettes.
2. You need to clean up your outlines. Make them darker then the rest and only one pixel wide.
3. the shading on the body isn't really visible so that's no problem, but the shading on the hair looks way off. first of all it's pillowshaded, the lightsource comes from the left front of the sprite.
secondly put in some highlights and use only 2 colours of shades.

if you can't get it right yourself, try to look at some of my characters. I hope you finish it and seperate the attributes for the charactermaker.

 

[Necrile]

:X Damn, I spent so much time on that and it was wasted Q_Q
Oh well, back to the drawing board.. thanks GR
Edit: Hows this for the first stepping animation?
http://img34.picoodle.com/img/img34/8/6/19/f_11111showinm_def72a3.png[/IMG]

 

[Colormagix]

:X Damn, I spent so much time on that and it was wasted Q_Q
Oh well, back to the drawing board.. thanks GR
Edit: Hows this for the first stepping animation?
http://img34.picoodle.com/img/img34/8/6/19/f_11111showinm_def72a3.png[/IMG]

As a young spriter you must remember that anytime you spend spriting, is always a good thing and is never considered a waste. Practicing and making attempts is the only way to improve.

 

[Necrile]

thanks lone sight :D
Heres the full walking animation downwards:
http://img26.picoodle.com/img/img26/8/6/19/f_11111m_635392e.png[/IMG]
(WIP of course)

 

[green raven]

http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s315 ... sample.png[/IMG]
keep it up and keep improving

 

[Luvas]

do not obtain to make an eye for the frog =/

http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/9620/froghx8.png[/img]

 

[Fomar0153]

I thought I'd have another go:
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y139/F ... mplete.png[/IMG]
It's based off my best friend, the only person out of my friends who doesn't wear mostly black. Is the outline for his T-Shirt dark enough and I wouldn't mind some advice on sideview hair being as it wasn't very good on my previous sprite?

 

[Necrile]

Thanks GR!
http://img28.picoodle.com/img/img28/8/6/19/f_Girsamplem_a45c0db.png[/IMG]
Do you think you could give me one last push and do the first sprite on the bottom row? :D You don't hafta, but it could seriously help how good I sprite in the future :P

 

[Colormagix]

do not obtain to make an eye for the frog =/

http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/9620/froghx8.png[/img]

I assume by obtain you meant make? Well here is a quick 2 second attempt that can guide you in the right direction.

http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/2871/frogis9.png[/IMG]

 

[GameRage]

All that template fever has to stop someday, don't you agree?

Why don't you team up with InvisibleDrifter and do a great game, I'm sure you too can do a real f*.*ing great game.

I'M SERIOUS !!

 

[Luvas]

Thx for help Lone!

http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/4526/frog3pk5.png[/img] or fixe http://img352.imageshack.us/img352/8106/frog2nv0.png[/img]

 

[JD_Slasha]

Bleachin' it up yo.
Still WIP's.

Ichigo:
http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/717/ichigooj1.png[/img]
Renji:
http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/1586/renjizp8.png[/img]

 

[Snowbear]

Oh.. i love does!!!.. :*)

Well i have never sprited befor..but i tried with this:

Buddhist monk
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y131/T ... ddhist.png[/IMG]

Its kind of bad, but well i have never sprited befor.. hehe .. so give me tip how to make it bether, and i might try make a set of it.. =) Well have allways want to make a buddhist game (Since i am a buddhist) and i might do it later.. =)

Edit:

Update:

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y131/T ... ekopia.png[/IMG]

I now the 4th at the upper line is wrong gonna fix it!

 

[Griff Hyral]

Bleachin' it up yo.
Still WIP's.

Ichigo:
http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/717/ichigooj1.png[/img]
Renji:
http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/1586/renjizp8.png[/img]

Nice Slasha, haha, coincidence...im listening to Asterisk...

 

[uzumakishade]

JD please finish those Bleach chars! they look awesome!

 

[Snowbear]

Is there any Tilesets that works with this template..??

 

[uzumakishade]

GR is working on one, give him some time

 

[gunga1]

I gave shade the ability to float!
http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/1/flyshadeaf6.png[/img]
All credit to Green.

You can use my Tyke interiors with the breeze too.
Credit me!
Walltop
Carpet
Setup

 

[Snowbear]

Well here is next update. (thx Lonesight for helping me)

Buddhist monk

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y131/T ... kkopia.png[/IMG]

well i need feedback and tips, also help how to do the to last 2 lines..

 

[green raven]

as I said before and I will repeat it again images say more then words.

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@luvas
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s315 ... batman.png[/IMG]
pure blacks are you enemy, except for maybe outlines like J.D. slasha's style.

http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s315 ... e-frog.png[/IMG]
the eys should be there because of the angle the sprites are in.
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@Gir
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s315 ... ample2.png[/IMG]
here you go, if you finished it try making one this good without help :p
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@Fomar
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s315 ... arhelp.png[/IMG]
darker outlines :p, and you still pillowshade the hair. ''pillowshading is putting shades all around''
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@snowbear
try this =P
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s315 ... stmonk.png[/IMG]
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@J.D SLasha
your style works really great on this template, much better then it looks on halfkaisers imho
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wipfighter02
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s315 ... ighter.png[/IMG]