Alright, here are some various thoughts I had while playing. Note that I actually enjoyed it, I'm just pointing out what could be improved:
-In the intro, they used white text with bright pictures, which made it a pain to read. I might advise you change the color of the text there to make it less of a strain.
-When Gale(?) was talking to himself at the begining, it was solid white text on a white background. Very painful, really.
-The game seemed to lag a lot, especially in the battle system and outdoor areas.
-For once I'd like to see a white mage (Healer, cleric, call it what you will) that wasn't a girl, and a warrior that wasn't a guy. It's the oldest pairup in the book.
-When I entered Rutger's (don't know if that's the right spelling, or if it's even his name >_>) room in the mansion, the characters walked up to him and it spat out an error message about 'width' in ccoa's UMS. Obviously I had to stop there.
Good luck with it! :thumb: