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[Almishal]

Hi Nikki! ( Off-topic: I'm grateful that I'm alive during my 3-days "exam"  :dead: )

On-topic:

Let me start with the buildings which you posted:

Subway: I'm quite confuse what is below the train, [ the one with 4 doors? ( sorry if they are not doors  :smile: ) and the 4 ladders ]
Question: What are those?  :lol:

Slum: Impressive, but the space ( above the bodega americana, the building near it, and the building to the far north west ) are quite big  :smile:
Question: Can you add a little " decoration " with them?  :huh:

School: Nicely done from inside to outside.
Question: Is this a public or private school? Cause if its private it fits well, but if public, well.... the area should be big  :lol:

Grocer: ( I'm out of my vocabulary  :down: ) Let's see... Good  :huh:

Diner:  :lol: Good  :blush: ( Out of words, so sorry if I'm gonna re-use some words  :dead: )
Question: What's with the space to the north-east?  :shock:

Church: Outside good, inside... ( Request: Could you put a confession room?  :dead: )

Apartment: Good!  :lol:

Window Skin: Put some decorations on it and it will be beatiful  :lol: ( Last of the words I know  :dead: )

Well... That's all for this post for now  :dead:

Thanks You  :lol:

TO Mods and to the people reading:
Thank You Very Much! I hope we will have a clean atmosphere in this topic from now on.  :blush:

P.S.
Mods, sorry with the very LONG reply  :down: I don't know how to put it in a spoiler  :huh: Tell me how to put it in a spoiler please  :straightthumb:

 

[Dalton]

Well it wouldn't be half as long if you didn't use as many emoticons, eh?

 

[Almishal]

Well it wouldn't be half as long if you didn't use as many emoticons, eh?

Please stay on-topic.... I just like emoticons that's why they are that many...

On-topic:

Nikki, do you have any ideas on what music ( MP3 right? ) to use?

Short as it maybe for now...

Thanks You.

 

[nikki]

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[Almishal]

Spoiler

Well.... At least your honest that there will be more dialogs with "love" sentences.... Putting a confession room is good. ( Just be sure the main character don't do anything inside that sacred place, I'm prefering the whole church itself.  :pissed: ) The music? Let's see.... It could be better if you use an old timer music  :huh: ( Joke... or maybe? ) or a music you like where others doesn't even heard about  :dead: . When it is actually a "hentai" game, I think.... ( or maybe  :dead: ) that you reduce some foul words... Likely what you put in your last post  :dead: like " Sh*t up ,b*itch!" and " Put it in me! "  :huh: Besides, it'll be great if it concentrates on the story... ( not on the "eye candy" concentrated  :dead: ) OH! One more thing, have you chosen a title for your game?  :smile:

Thanks You

Off-topic:
You're not catholic? Then what is your religion?  :shock:

P.S.
Keep the good work Nikki! and Good Luck!  :blush:

 

[nikki]

Well honestly I dont know how to write dialog for a game with content like this in any other way than to be vulgar an awful lot of the time. Although I will try to make the bits leading up to the nasty stuff focus more on character development and story.

No, I havent yet chosen a title for it. I have a few ideas though, I'll settle on one eventually. Nor have I decided exactly what music to use...

I beleive in god, and respect the bible...other than that Im not a very devout person.

 

[nikki]

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[nikki]

Anyone have any suggestions for what I should name the stalker game? I've been thinking something blatant like "Rape City"

Harem Quest sounds good enough for the fantasy game so I think I'll stick with that.

 

[p-kitty]

how about creep city? Lol

I haven't had the time to read the whole thread but I got through the first page before I had to leave so I'm just posting to save the thread to make it easier for me to find later when I have time to finish reading.

What I've read so far though sounds interestin. Very excited.

 

[Almishal]

Almishal here! I have "some" title suggestions of your "stalker" game...  :dead:

Titles ( Suggestions ) :
....... Well... I don't have one in mind  :dead:
You could make your own title  :lol: Example: Let's put adventure... with ecchi... ( ecchi means perverted  :huh: ) Advechi?
*pause in silence* Errr.... Wrong one  :dead:
But let me think some when I'm asleep.... ZZZZzzzz....  :neutral:

To the people reading this: [ BOTH Mods and Users... ( Wrong term?  :huh: ) ]
Help Nikki make a title for this game! Help is appreciated! ( Don't make a funny title o else....  :pissed: )

Anout the screenshots.... All I could say is... [ Are they looking at me in vain, did they just see a ghost? ( C-R-E-E-P-Y ) or what? :shock: ]

Thanks You.

P.S.
A person always think better when well-rest.
A person knows more when he/she is in a calm place.
Don't push yourself too much Nikki!  :smile:

 

[nikki]

Heh. I'm sure I'll come up with a decent title soon enough. And yeah, the girls all look freaked out in those pics. I intentionally did that...they are the prey after all so they shouldn't look happy. "Oh boy, Im in a game about rape!"

I am trying to finish building the city before I focus too much on the story and stuff, so I have places ready for the girls to...you know...hide in. I think Im just about done with that for the most part. Completed so far:

Mainstreet
Slum
Factory district
park
school
suburbs
church

Which pretty much sums up everything I would need...of course each of these areas will have several interiors as well such as the diner and subway.


*edit* Hey, maybe I'll call the game "City Stalker" or...maybe..."Sexy Prowler" haha. That last one sounds like a name a real japanese game would be called.

Sexy Prowler sounds kinda okay...maybe I'll go with that.

 

[nikki]

Hey guys take a look at this pic:

http://i372.photobucket.com/albums/oo16 ... /kanin.jpg

What sort of uniform is that girl in the lower left corner wearing? I just dont know...and it would be kinda hard to come up with a story for her if I dont.

 

[Talaho]

That is either a guide's uniform (for like a museum) or perhaps maybe a secretary. By the way. That nun must have quite a gift from god for her bust to show through that gown.

Oops. That was the right. The at the left appears to be a ranger. Maybe a policewoman, but most likely a forest ranger.

 

[dcbd]

hm...

she's either a guide, or in the military.
it would be more interesting if she was in the military me thinks.

also... why do they all look worried :shock:.

 

[Talaho]

hm...

she's either a guide, or in the military.
it would be more interesting if she was in the military me thinks.

also... why do they all look worried :shock:.

The artist probably wanted to give them a turned on look (some of their nipples are saying hello to the world) and failed horribly.

 

[nikki]

hm...

she's either a guide, or in the military.
it would be more interesting if she was in the military me thinks.

also... why do they all look worried :shock:.

Looks military to me. I guess thats what she is then...

And they look worried because they're all in a game about rape. Wouldnt do if they were all smiles.

*edit* actually now that I think about it, the uniform girl probably is some kind of guide. The game I got that pic from had something to do with trains...

 

[Almishal]

Almishal here! " Sexy Prowler " seems a suitable title to me.
( Although I have many titles in mind, I'll stick with your imagination... Hahaha... :dead: )

What else should I say...
Oh yeah! Could you put the main menu? Please? Pretty Please? I'm quite curious... ( No malice please! :dead: )

Thanks You

P.S.
Happy New Year Nikki by the way... and to all persons here! :smile:
( I should make a project or two... Ugghh.. :dead: )

 

[nikki]

The title screen is not done yet. And when it is, it probably wont be all that great. I dont have photoshop, I use a cheap knockoff called imageforge and it simply is not as good.

 

[RedWitch]

Hey looking good so far...I would have said guide for that uniform...or maybe an army medic volunteer - I think in WW2 the women wore uniforms like that with a band around the arm too.

 

[Almishal]

Almishal here! ( Again. )

The title screen is that really that bad? :neutral:
Well.... nevermind then, I don't mind waiting. [ I have a lot of patience... Tons of it! ( Or Am I? ) ]
Cheer up and take a LOT of rest! ( You're gonna need them for a wide variety of choices later. )
And Nikki, make sure that inside ( and outside as well.... ) of the church , no H-events . You know that's a special place. [ Is that in the fantasy or modern? ( Suggestion: If fantasy, put a NPC where the main char gets his quests... ) ]

Thanks You

P.S.
By the way, I'm quite jealous.... Ehehehehe... ( Won't tell why because its not part of the topic :huh: )
[ Off-topic: I prefer the titles Vermillion Genesis for the Fantasy game and City Wh*res for the modern one ( * is o :huh: , girls might not like it.... :boo: ) ]
Take Care! Don't push yourself too far Nikki!