WIP Dump Thread

[moog]

sounds waaaaaaaaaaaaay too hectic tone down the randominity and make something with a standard melody first

cant make a human without a skeleton

 

[Admiral David]

new guitar track up, check it out !

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=foL6V2EOWLE

 

[moog]

Admiral David youre missing the point of this thread; its not LOL OST DUMP its music you're working on or just starting, something you just made as a WIP; something like that. You cant use this for advertising, youve been doing that in two of your other threads man

 

[Admiral David]

Admiral David youre missing the point of this thread; its not LOL OST DUMP its music you're working on or just starting, something you just made as a WIP; something like that. You cant use this for advertising, youve been doing that in two of your other threads man

advertising? dude the thread says MUSIC >>>>and<<<< WIP. music is music. if you're a true musician you'd appreciate that. instead of intentionally trying to find a reason to be hissy lets just make music :thumb:

 

[moog]

its not that its the fact that youve dumped it every where

im not mad or anything i was just throwing it out there

 

[Admiral David]

ok u won this one lol i'll limit it to music thread from now on :

 

[moog]

http://bb.ohsk.net/uploads/piano.mid

just got my new midi board d a yamaha clavinova, cost an assload but i didnt pay for it heh

but yeah i did some recording with two layer piano midi, i was just messing around in F minor but i think the melody turned out pretty good so might continue with it. tips? crits?

 

[Rliv]

Honestly Moog. I've found nothing you should work on with it, but perhaps expanding it more heh. I may pick up on something, but so far it sounds really good.

This is a work in progress tune, sounds like it'd be done, but no the main course needs tweaking I think.

Base of Disorder
http://www.esnips.com/doc/53ec8297-8b4e ... f-Disorder

 

[Toams]

wow

that could have been awesome.

however.

the lead is all random.

i mean, if you fix that to be more uplifting,
and a legato melody that compliments the bassline,
and the arpeggio's in the background,
then it could be something cooler

i've been working on two small intermezzo things lately
i can't decide whether or not they're good

so here goes:

http://tomasknipscheer.nl/stuff/Tomas%20-%20Tetr.mp3
http://tomasknipscheer.nl/stuff/Tomas - Tetr (op. II).mp3

and this random thing:

http://tomasknipscheer.nl/stuff/Vial.mp3 (including annyoing violin)

 

[Rliv]

however.

the lead is all random.

i mean, if you fix that to be more uplifting,
and a legato melody that compliments the bassline,
and the arpeggio's in the background,
then it could be something cooler

Awesome thanks a lot, yeah I was feeling it was getting a bit out of hand myself lol I tend to go a bit everywhere in my music at times, but by uplifting, and legato? What did you mean? I'm still getting into music here and there so I'm not as versed as I should be heh.

Btw I liked how the last one you made was coming out heh violin doesn't sound that bad, fits really heh. And the 2nd link isn't working.

Edit: Wait I think I got it, heh thanks again, I'll keep you guys in the loop with it. Yeah needs way more uplifting and fixing up with the course more, slows down and I feel it should keep a steady flow. I'll work at that bassline as well, having something go around with it more.

Also the 2nd tune I feel the little part that comes in with the cellos I think, sound a little sketchy, maybe it's volume? I don't know, but it's coming out pretty good. Kind of a sad melody it sounds.

 

[Toams]

here's a small sample of a new thing im making
won't call it a song, but it definetly has me going

http://tomasknipscheer.nl/stuff/TRACK.mp3

 

[moog]

http://bb.ohsk.net/uploads/Battery%20Powered.mp3

enjoy

 

[Shizu]

http://bb.ohsk.net/uploads/Battery%20Powered.mp3

enjoy

This can turn into something REALLY good.

 

[moog]

Thanks! Im still messing with it a bit more, it was just something that I was doing with my new midi keyboard.

 

[moog]

update

http://bb.ohsk.net/uploads/BatteryPowered.mp3

 

[Shizu]

notably between 0:36-1:00 will be perfect with a bass line to fill in between the kicks. 0:18~ is catchy. I gotta love 5/4 :}

 

[Toams]

hey man you're getting better at this!
i like the flow of this, and i think some more glitchy sounds would improve the chip-ness of it

i've been working on this:

http://tomasknipscheer.nl/stuff/muzak/Tomas - HUR (Heads-Up-Rabbit).mp3

its an err.. electronic piece, pretty hard.
and i can't be bothered to lengthen the climax or make the rest of the song.
im not sure what to do next, so some advice?

 

[moog]

thanks alot both of you! i appreciate the comments. shizu, i will look into making a bass line :D

tomas this is dope so far. I like the percussive melody and the gradual crescendo with the fat synth sound! the bass progression is really nice too. sounds like something I would hear in an fps or on a title screen of a game. I think the volume issue is a bit of a problem sometimes, you build up the sound and then it sounds a bit to cluttered like at 2:00- 2:15. Besides that, I think its pretty well balanced and is turning into a really dope track man!


i hate to dump something else but i need some input on this too, its another WIP im doing for an OST:
http://bb.ohsk.net/uploads/Snow%20Globe.mp3

 

[Toams]

is that something i've heard before? it sounds familiar..
btw by glichy sounds i meant hats, chip hats.

anyway, at the moment its the same thing repeated twice, right?
it's one pattern repeated twice, and it loops.
i suggest you make the looping part three pieces long.
i say the first part you keep that way, that's a very solid base. for the second part you add in another instrument, maybe like a bass again. keep it airy and fresh though, its a very light song.

for the third part, before the loop ends, i suggest you revert to those three melodies you had at the beginning, and make them staccato, so it feels a little bit fragile, (i think i heard you talking putting this over an ice level sometime so walking on ice is feels very fragile too (not my best english but deal with it))

 

[theGoldenMoon]

Alrighty, here goes. First time very composing :biggrin: Just downloaded Muse Score. This incredibly short (and ear hurting) track was me trying to figure out how to use it. I did learn how to read a violas clef though. To be honest I prefer to improv on a piano but seeing as my keyboards broken that won't be happening. It's incredibly choppy (was trying to figure out how to add pedal). Enjoy

http://bb.ohsk.net/uploads/Remeniscent%20Dream.midi.mid