WIP Dump Thread

[Toams]

I was working on this: http://tomasknipscheer.nl/stuff/muzak/T ... rf-%20(wip).mp3
Opinions? Suggestions?

I want it to be a typical electro house song, but I'm afraid my style won't let me.
I never end up with clean sounds.

 

[aphadeon]

Here's one I'm working on now. It's quite a contrast from my "style", but I wanted to try something darker.
I know the transitions are rough, it's still just a "demo" at this point. But I'd like some feedback.

http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?a47v32f3q8jcxw1

Main focus this far has been fine-tuning the sounds themselves. The melody's suffered a bit for it, but tone is coming along nicely. Still doesn't quite round out the spectrum though Not sure what to do with it.