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Whisper of a Rose

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Whisper of a Rose Website
Current version: 1.05


LQ YouTube w/o sound; of some gameplay (item farming).

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Here's the code:
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(with the 2 underscores removed)

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Credits for making the superb userbar: Kodakami!

Storyline
20 years from now, the teenaged girl Melrose lives in an abusive environment. One day, a mean girl from school wrecks her important school project, and the girl's friends try to beat her up. She snaps and decides to steal a device she saw earlier on the TV, the iDream -- a device intended to draw the user into a peaceful environment for relaxtion. By abusing the hospitality of the owner of a museum, she acquires a prototype of the device. She flees into the sewers and activates it. But instead of finding herself in heaven, the dream world is revealed to be dangerous and confusing. A mysterious fairy godmother appears and offers to help her get home. But the fairy is suddenly kidnapped by a vicious clown, Coulroz. On her way to find the fairy godmother and ask for a way out, she meets up with three characters, and grows more and more attached to the fantastical dreamworld that is being attacked by recently appearing demons. And, what is the real purpose of the iDream chips?


Downloads

Original Soundtrack!
Download some tracks from the OST!
Seize The Day (game's theme song)
an army of One (tune for common battles)
Dreams (dreamworld song; by Koda Kami)


Characters
Protagonists
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Melrose
An introvert teenaged girl, thrown into the role of a swordsman.
Having been raised by two incompetent parents, she's grown used to being on her own. She doesn't allow anyone to get close to her, but she isn't afraid to push someone back either.
She has a love for defenseless creatures, as she subconsciously feels attached to them. One day she tried to stop a bully from burning a ladybug, but failed.

Hellena
The loving witch daughter of an evil wizard.
When growing up, her parents tried to force her into becoming a vicious witch. She struggled over the years to resist them. Then one day, her father killed her mother. When she found out, she took her mother's pendant and ran away.
But then why is she so eager to join Melrose's journey that takes them to the Mighty Wizard, her father?

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Diamond
A courageous ladybug with the task to save his entire village.
He has always been the weakest ladybug of the village. His time magic was never up to par with that of the others. He had no friends, and was unimportant. So he dreamed every day of an adventure that would allow him to prove himself. To prove himself to be important, and not dispensable.
Then one day his village was attacked by trolls, that captured all ladybugs. Diamond managed to escape, and decided that this would be his chance to prove himself once and for all

Christina
An arrogant ex-prostitute and agent seeking revenge on her previous boss.
Her mother had died when she was young, and her father had no job. Thus she had no money to pay for a high school and university on her level of intelligence. So instead of money, she sold her body to get what she wanted. Soon after finishing a criminal rights study at the university, she met a man that made her feel loved, but who also took advantage of her. This lover boy made her into a prostitute. But she became pregnant with the man, and the man threatened to take away her baby. So she fled, and started a new life as a secret agent for the government, that hired her because of her great seductive skills and intelligence. She was assigned to investigate suspicions regarding the iDream development. However, because an unknown cause, she fell into a coma while at CareTech. And she has been a coma until this day.

Antagonists
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Coulroz
A sadistic clown seeking to poison Melrose's mind.
An evil character following Melrose around in the dreamworld and haunting her. This character seems to have a strange connection to Melrose's actual past.

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Bubble & Mr. Purr
A mysterious girl and her cat, making opposing Melrose's goals a fun game.
Bubble is the incarnation of envy and loneliness that are within little girls. She is jealous of Melrose's powers and of Melrose making friends with Hellena and Diamond, whilst Melrose is a very unpleasant girl. Bubble feels that she deserves friendship more than Melrose, and so she hinders Melrose's journey as much as possible.


Screenshots
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Gameplay
Battles
Battles are side-view. Each participant of a battle has a time bar that gradually fills. Once full, the character may make a move. Physical attacks take place instantly, but magic has a loading time which can vary from instantly to some time. This calls for strategy. An enemy flashes white when it is preparing for a magic spell. Then it is your character's turn. Will you defend? Quickly use a healing item? Or will you use time-magic to delay the enemy's magic spell?

Skills
Each character has two to three category of skills, varying between 6-9 skills. Each skill is unique and has its own purpose. You can upgrade a skill's power / lower the cost of usage / increase casting speed by collecting points from NPCs and spending them in a tree-shaped grid. Will you split your points up to be ready for any situation, on focus on a particular strategy, such as weakening an enemy's magic defense and then pummeling it with torrents and geysers?

Summonings
Melrose, the main character, is able to summon allies to aid the party in battle. Once summoned, the allies will enter the battlefield and cast magic and use attacks on his or her own. Their power automatically increases with the party's experience level. Also, Melrose may learn skills to make her summonings stronger in battle, such as a skill to increase their speed. Summonings slowly drain Magic Points, however, and should thus be used wisely. Each Summoning has a unique set of skills and all are fantastical creatures. These include: Little Red Riding Hood, Sinterklaas, Humpty Dumpty, and more!


Glitters
99% original graphics (aside from a few RTP things).
A simple yet advanced menu system.
Classic character customization system.
A story involving clowns and prostitutes.
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Special thanks to the AMAZING scripter arev and the superb music team, which includes Koda Kami, Shizu and Matt.
 
Who would have thought a game that sounds like the Wizard of Oz could look good.

Storyline is fresh, although a bit strange.  She takes a "dream machine" by taking a hostage sounds a bit too extreme.  Also instead of being in a peaceful environment, she is transported to a queer-ish, fantasy world filled with things you'd only see in your nightmares (butterflies and giant mushrooms  :dead:).  Also, now that she's here, she wants to return to her horrible home?  Makes it look like she over-exaggerated when she took that iDream machine.  Story needs some better-ing.

Characters section look fine, although it lacks detail.

Maps are pretty good and well-detailed.  Did you make the tilesets (for the giant flowers and mushrooms) yourself?

Overall it looks pretty interesting, although you should try to post more in my opinion.

EDIT:  By post more, I mean like a features section and maybe a projected date for a demo release and whatnot.
 
Haha, fast post. I'll reply in detail. :3

Who would have thought a game that sounds like the Wizard of Oz could look good.
I get that a lot.

She takes a "dream machine" by taking a hostage sounds a bit too extreme.  Also instead of being in a peaceful environment, she is transported to a queer-ish, fantasy world filled with things you'd only see in your nightmares (butterflies and giant mushrooms  ).  Also, now that she's here, she wants to return to her horrible home?  Makes it look like she over-exaggerated when she took that iDream machine.  Story needs some better-ing.
Haha. I see your point. Regarding the hostage. She saw the device on a documentary on the TV, and that the prototype development was being funded by Mercury Warehouse. She went there and happened to come across the owner, and took him hostage. They then gave the prototype. After getting hit around by her parents, her school project being wrecked by a mean girl at school, and being attacked by some of that girl's friends in the woods, she kinda snapped. She snaps easily. :3

As for getting home, the first three areas she's in (in the dreamworld) is the lair of a demon, an infested version of her high school and a mysterious inn. Without any money, means of getting a home and the attacks from demons on the lands, she decides to go back home by seeking out the only person who seems to know what is going on (the fairy godmother). Besides, even if she would want to stay in the dream world, she doesn't have a home or any friends, and wants to keep moving forward.

Characters section look fine, although it lacks detail.
Well, I didn't want an overabundane of information. :3

Maps are pretty good and well-detailed.  Did you make the tilesets (for the giant flowers and mushrooms) yourself?
All graphics are 99% made by me (except RTP and a few things here and there).

Overall it looks pretty interesting, although you should try to post more in my opinion.
Yea, features would be ncie. I'll do that now. :3

Thanks for the review.~~
 
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I really hope the RTP tiles are placeholders. They clash pretty bad with your style.
 
Twin Matrix":25ddsf9x said:
Thanks for the review.~~

No problem.  You should maybe include what you wrote in reply to me in the story. (e.g. instead of "Through taking a hostage, she receives the iDream prototype" you could say "After getting beat up, she snaps and takes a hostage in order to steal the iDream prototype".  That, but better.)

@Sonata:  What's clashing?  I see nothing wrong with the picture.
 
The design is nice, but the RTP which is pixel-art clashes with your style which is stemixing. Maybe you could make some similar tiles in your own style to substitute the RTP?
 
Well, if I'd re-do the tiles they'd most probably end up looking almost the same. For now I'll leave them, but I'll probably end up making my own castle tileset down the road anyway, and then I'll replace those tiles. =)

and omghowdoyouknow the name of my style iloveyou

@Mukanshin: Hmm, good suggestion. I'll add that.
 
Ahh, I think I see what you mean Sonata...

@TM:  Yeah, pretty much it's just adding in the extra details to make it more complete and understandable.  If you want some help re-writing your story by the way, PM me.
 
I love your artistic style, and fondly remember your 'Stemixing tutorial' thread. It gave me some good insights, which I liked. You seem to have gotten better at it since then - the art is very smooth.
I'm not sold on the main character's hair, but that may be a personal thing rather than an aesthetic one.
All in all, keep up the good work - I plan to keep a close eye on this.
 
Is the last screenshot part of a cutscene and animated?
I can imagine that cloudy stuff being breath from a giant demon or something...

I've already seen the others in the map display thread, and I thought they were top-notch.

Best piece in this thread is your logo though..
Might I ask how you did the little.. err.. pretty things attached to the 'W' and 'R'?
 
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Thanks, Samot. : ) And yup, most 'eye-candy' tilesets get a screening through the screenshot thread before popping up here, hehe.~

The last screenshot is actually animated, but not in the way you think. It's the first 'dreamworld' area you visit, and the cloudy stuff is what you walk on. The cloudy stuff slightly moves and the stars do, too. But nice idea with the breath. ^^

And I suppose I did the little ornaments around the logo just by drawing them in real life, then scanning and fixing up~. There wasn't some kind of special technique. ^^ Glad you like the logo.
 
Trippy. This game has some beautiful maps and spritework. I hope to try this out some, gives me a mixed feeling of kingdom hearts and bioshock.
 
Amazing. I haven't seen custom graphics this nice in an rmxp game since.... well.... never? (Well, maybe aveyond)
I like Bubble and Mr.Purr. Seems sadistic children with cute pets (or stuffed animals) happen to be my video game fetish.

Again, beautiful.

Best of luck.
 
Thanks Lins. ^__^

New screenshot, showing off, of course, the most massive skill I could think of. XD

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I ended up stealing the tornado from VX, because mine looked crappy compared to that one. :3 I kept the SWOOOOSH effects (wind being sucked in) and debree, though.

As you can see in the screenie, everyone's being hit with the tornado. I try to keep strategy to my skills. Hardly any skill is just damage, the very powerful skills usually hit everyone on the battle field, and skills that give status effects are 99% of the times unique to that skill. This way I try to make it actually important what you choose with skill buying. Like, should I buy all WEATHER skills, and in the end get the powerful TORNADO, or should I buy all NATURE skills, and end up with the powerful POLLEN that puts all enemies to sleep. :] While POLLEN is very useful, TORNADO used in combination with WIND RESISTANCE is a very powerful skill, too. Especially when used against large amounts of enemies. [/rant]

I'm almost done with all battle animations for the main characters.
 
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