Her anatomy and stance look really odd, it's like she's gone from a dead on sideview with the arm and head, to a 3/4 stance on the chest, and one boob is majorly bigger than the other, her stomach also seems to be really far out too... unless she walks with a curved back.
I don't claim to be a good drawer or master of anatomy or whatever, but here's a quick, and really poor, edit... or more of a guide anyway, where I've tried to change the perspective of the chest and fixed the giant boob (The one on the right was way too big in comparison, should have been closer to the chest too, something akin to this)
I don't claim to be a good drawer or master of anatomy or whatever, but here's a quick, and really poor, edit... or more of a guide anyway, where I've tried to change the perspective of the chest and fixed the giant boob (The one on the right was way too big in comparison, should have been closer to the chest too, something akin to this)