[VX] void

[MukanshinBlack]

1st, why s the game title Void?

Second, make the story a little more detailed also, I would have name the main character something else, Yoshi is the cute dinosaur in the Super Mario games, so it´s a little strange

Else, I like the game, but sime mapping tutos wouldn´t hurt
And you really should look to write the story more detailed :

Why is it called Void? I guess the biggest reason is because "void" is a word in the english language that means "empty" among other things, and it has some to do with the game.

I don't see what else I have to add to the story. It's detailed enough in my opinion. Please be specific.

Also, Yoshi is a japanese name. Yes, they called the dinosaur from Super Mario that. Probaly because it is a japanese name and the game was made in Japan.

I've looked at plenty of mapping tutorials and the screenshots are somewhat outdated. Also, please explain what is wrong with the story.

 

[woratana]

If you're interested, I can give you an unencrypt demo of my dropped project Foxsuke. You may find something useful for your ABS. Though, I can't let you use graphics and maps in there. PM me if you're interesting about this~^^

 

[RPGS]

Nah, no acctually the story needs no work at all

Bt I really like that you have a mix between ABS and turnbased or wt it is

I´m not a good mapper either, but please a little more variation in your maps :X

 

[MukanshinBlack]

Yeah. Mapping is always being worked on / bettered but there only is so much you can do in mapping on RMVX. Also the story is worked on / bettered when I see it needs more work. I think I'm at a good spot right now in both mapping and story.

 

[memyselforwho]

This looks pretty promising. I'll have to keep an eye out. Although your mapping is a tad out of touch. (you said it was outdated, so I'll ignore that).

If you need help with writing, let me know ; )

 

[MukanshinBlack]

I'm supposedly starting college in May so I've been preparing for that and haven't worked on void in a while, but thanks I guess. Even then though I'm not sure if I'll have time for RPG Maker.