Volcano
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Daron Alwynd
Member
I'll try out your demo and give you as detailed a review as I can.:thumb:
EDIT:
So I tried the game, but there are a few issues I experienced very early. Maybe it's a problem with my system, but I wasn't able to see text in the menus or battle system. I noticed a number of tileset issues as well. Some of your tiles that should be passable are not, such as bookshelves and in front of statues. Also, the blue carpet in the castle's dining hall is not passable. Unfortunately I didn't make it very far in the demo as I got trapped in one of the rooms in the castle.
In my opinion the biggest issue is your grammar. Take some time to work on that; maybe ask someone for help in that regard. A close friend or family member, maybe. Make note of the introduction, which seems to run on a little too much. Break it up into shorter sentences.
The story is promising and if you do it right I can imagine it would be a pretty interesting game to play. Keep at it!:thumb:
EDIT:
So I tried the game, but there are a few issues I experienced very early. Maybe it's a problem with my system, but I wasn't able to see text in the menus or battle system. I noticed a number of tileset issues as well. Some of your tiles that should be passable are not, such as bookshelves and in front of statues. Also, the blue carpet in the castle's dining hall is not passable. Unfortunately I didn't make it very far in the demo as I got trapped in one of the rooms in the castle.
In my opinion the biggest issue is your grammar. Take some time to work on that; maybe ask someone for help in that regard. A close friend or family member, maybe. Make note of the introduction, which seems to run on a little too much. Break it up into shorter sentences.
The story is promising and if you do it right I can imagine it would be a pretty interesting game to play. Keep at it!:thumb:
You couldn't see the text probably because you don't have the Monotype Corsiva font.Also a lot has change since that demo, but I have moved on to other parts of the game.I will fix up the demo soon and make a new version, but it may be a while from now and to bad you didn't finish because it gets much more interesting close to the end.
Daron Alwynd
Member
For the sake of your project I'll look up that font and give it another go later on.
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Exclude the map it's not finished, I just want to know what people think of the picture.
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It's very ugly in all honesty. Parts of the map are in a completely different style to the RTP tiles. The shadow on the text looks like you did everything on one layer causing the white to stay upon saving. The fish looks like a torpedo aswell.
From an artistic perspective, start again.
~ $t3v0
From an artistic perspective, start again.
~ $t3v0
A relevant conversation I found. But seriously, are these volcanoes like... The energy source, where a couple powerful people own certain ones and perform stereotypical evil landlord stuff? Also for your town logo you may want to consider using like... The trees in the RTP or something.
New Screenie introducing a new character !
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New Screenie of the biggest city in the game !
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Angelic Kain
Member
In an earlier screen, it looks kindof weird having the one mdern tileset with computers and technology and stuff in the middle of a very medevil looking game. And Sergo's faceset doesn't match his character.:yes:
Well the game isn't Medievel it's setting is in the distan future thousands of years from noew and it's how I look at it...it's all a fantasy anyways so you can really do what you want, but I see where your coming from.Also the faceset issue since it's close to how he looks I'm staying with it because it's too much of a hassle going searching for this stuff.
Update:I have postponed Chapter 2 to work on my huge crime infested city or town whatever you want to call it.
Mid City
Mid-City is a huge part of this game and is the biggest town in the game and possible one of the biggest town's made with RMXP(I may be wrong, if there's something I havn't seen)It's crime infested and poverty has taken over completely.The town's divided into 7 districts.
1st District-Trying to make it out of a theme park extravaganza but I have know thoguht out plan for it so I'm currently looking for someone to help map this one for me.
2nd District-Town Square nuff said.
3rd District-This is where the legendary Holy Sanctuary is located also mapping needed here.
4th District-A typically bad urban area, but it's quite small and the lower Canal range is located here. Also the enrance to Urquahart Woods
5th District-The biggest urban area in the city and the worst.It's none for it's bad housing developments, which houses at least 500 citizens.It's also where the graveyard is located and the upper Canal range and the entrance to the 6th District or the Good Side.
6th District-The suburbs is what everyone calls them.This is where all the rich upper classed people live.It's also the biggest district since it's like another town.Some even tried t make it another town, but most still consider it Mid-City.Travelers can't get in here unless they have a passport...how to get it well you'll just have to wait and see
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7th District- This hasn't began development yet, but will start soon.This is basically City Hall where all the businesses and stuff is.This is also where Mayor Tapp lives who is the new mayor of this city more on that story in the game.Once again if anyone wants to help please tell me.
Now finally those screenies :
It's a pain getting in this district.
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Nice Big Town Houses !
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But Don't It Look Better With Flowers !
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Mid City
Mid-City is a huge part of this game and is the biggest town in the game and possible one of the biggest town's made with RMXP(I may be wrong, if there's something I havn't seen)It's crime infested and poverty has taken over completely.The town's divided into 7 districts.
1st District-Trying to make it out of a theme park extravaganza but I have know thoguht out plan for it so I'm currently looking for someone to help map this one for me.
2nd District-Town Square nuff said.
3rd District-This is where the legendary Holy Sanctuary is located also mapping needed here.
4th District-A typically bad urban area, but it's quite small and the lower Canal range is located here. Also the enrance to Urquahart Woods
5th District-The biggest urban area in the city and the worst.It's none for it's bad housing developments, which houses at least 500 citizens.It's also where the graveyard is located and the upper Canal range and the entrance to the 6th District or the Good Side.
6th District-The suburbs is what everyone calls them.This is where all the rich upper classed people live.It's also the biggest district since it's like another town.Some even tried t make it another town, but most still consider it Mid-City.Travelers can't get in here unless they have a passport...how to get it well you'll just have to wait and see
and
7th District- This hasn't began development yet, but will start soon.This is basically City Hall where all the businesses and stuff is.This is also where Mayor Tapp lives who is the new mayor of this city more on that story in the game.Once again if anyone wants to help please tell me.
Now finally those screenies :
It's a pain getting in this district.
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Nice Big Town Houses !
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But Don't It Look Better With Flowers !
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The Storyteller
Member
seriously, this game seems abit to much to me. A medievil looking game with guns. I do not get that at all. The graphics dont work in some places. Good luck though.
New Screenies
Introducing a New Character
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Death Awaits Our Heroes
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Introducing a New Character
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Death Awaits Our Heroes
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