Thinking of posting a short story...

[Fafnir]

I'm thinking of posting a short story I did for an ELA assignment(it is my best written work), however, I'm wondering how many people are willing to sit through a 15 page story(would have been longer, but I had to really gut it, since the maximum was 8 pages). It's pretty violent, a little cliche, and also really cheasy, but I think it was well written. Anyone interested?

 

[The Cry of Fallen Angels]

Maybe if you post it.

 

[Fafnir]

Okay, first things first, character intros:

Abraham Beowulf: His name is just a reference to my favorite ballad, Beowulf. Nothing more. Other then that, his glasses are a reference to Alucard(and they look cool).
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Sedrick Gastlefiend: He's a psycho. Not much more to say. Oh, he's blind.
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Original Title Page:
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On to the good stuff....
Note that it is alot shorter then I wanted to make it.

Matthew Gaal
Vampire

He came to London, not for work, money, or fame. His business was far darker. He came on a boat, bathed in the mist of the Thames, and hid behind a pair of purple sunglasses. He was guarded by an arcane revolver, and garbed in an open coat worn on his shoulders. His cold, hard face disguised a young man whose dreams of a peaceful life had died long ago, for he was a vampire hunter.

The old, barely sea-worthy, boat came to a slow stop along the docks, and he walked onto English land for the first time. Behind him, a brute carried a large wooden crate.
“Ack! Abe! Ya thin this is ‘eavy enough ‘or ya?â€ÂÂ