Shifter Title Screen FINAL Come take a look! MAJOR EDITING!

[RadethDart]

Wow, when you criticize someone, you need to realize that just because you see one thing doesn't mean that is what it is...if you look, she is stepping out of another area...I mean, if you don't want to play the game...then don't! It is a puzzle game, that is the puzzle...

If you want to know a little more about the game...

You will have to wait until I decide to post about the game in early project development...patients, the game is just starting.

BTW, to the people that do understand the title...and not just by looking at the general image...yay! Lightning crotch...that was the dumbest thing you could have said, no offense...thank you for the good criticism.

This is the final, and I don't plan on editing it anymore because this describes my game perfectly! A puzzle game with teleporting...aka. "Shifting".

If you play the game when it is released, you will understand the pictures a little better.

 

[The Data Mage]

Looks like someone can't take a little critisism... He told you like it is... The little flashy stuff doesn't constitute shifting.... Thats like saying "This is not blue its green...why? because I say it's green and if you all can't see it's green you're all fucking morons!!!1!11!0!"

Question. Did you get permission from the creators of the pictures you stole to make your title image? I've not seen anything in the form of crediting.

And damn boy, change the little crappy copyrights thing.... 1. there is an actuall copyright symbol. Its not just a C in brackets lol. 2. The font being bold just looks stupid and 3. What the fuck is "Wot" games entertainment? You've not even developed ONE game let alone many that constitute "games entertainment", for the only entertainment you've given us is a laugh at your expense...

 

[RadethDart]

Alright, thanks for the feedback.

I am done with this topic because I have all of the feedback I need.

And about the WoT Games Entertainment, I will be producing more games...don't worry....I will me known.

 

[mawk]

I think that from the feedback it's clear that you still need more feedback, actually.

 

[RadethDart]

Alright, I took some advice...here is the picture now.

Spoiler

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[Grathea]

Here's an idea.
Instead of trying again and again to salvage what you've got...
now that you have a rough idea of what you want, start anew and go for that.
It'll be much better.
Also, wise up and get better at taking critiques, eh? We're just trying to help ya.

 

[RadethDart]

I did another...and I think it looks nice, but tell me what you think of those colors...and I am trying to work on taking better constructive criticism, it is just that I am young, and I am not used to posting my art online for people to go over, usually I just have my family do it...and well, they just want me to be happy about my work, so I am starting to get used to it, but I need criticism on my work, not what I say...

So, how about this one?

If you noticed, I softened up the phasing liquid a little.

 

[Xcelled]

My suggestion is take the title and the puzzle piece and run with those two elements to try to make a new title screen, You could definitely do without all that flashy stuff. One other thing to remember before you go calling it your art you have to remember the sources and give credit, even if your using a fancy photoshop brush set created by someone else. Also its good to show the unedited picture and credit the source.

 

[RadethDart]

Alright, thanks, I will work from there, and btw, there wasn't any person to credit, it was on flickr...no one asked for credit

 

[seven]

Alright, thanks, I will work from there, and btw, there wasn't any person to credit, it was on flickr...no one asked for credit

Do people really have to ask?