No offense, that is the worst shading I have ever seen on a breeze sprite. It goes against the rules of shading with any template. You for one, have to large of an outline. You pillow shaded the entire thing on every single frame, your hair has absolutely no consistency or volume, in other words it doesn't look like hair, looks like a giant slime took a dump on his head and the guy went with it. *Total sarcasm*
*sigh* Man, you need to work on your shading techniques, you gradient shade everything you make, that is a no-no, it is acceptable on certain things, but look at hair in real life, does it have a gradient effect? Or does it have strands, is multi colored, and sheen to it? You gotta get that down, it really detracts the quality of the sprite. When you use a palette you need to know how to use highlights, base tones, shades, and the outline.
As for the side view, it looks like he has an afro, like I said before, you need to work on volume and consistency, it needs to be toned down some, man if I had a friend and his hair looked like that, i'd tell him to tame the beast, cause that is just out of control.
Bottom frames, as said before, work with it, the bottom poses of hair don't tend to have a lot of extra detail, but you do need to make his hair move more, in all the frames.
It isn't a lost hope, just try to fix your stuff, because I would not ever take this to Breeze Revolution looking like this.
~Axerax
And please don't think I'm flaming your sprite, I'm giving you cynical comment and critique... If you don't like sarcasm, then I'm sorry, but that is how I C&C. And by the way, Charecter, is spelled wrong, it is spelled Character. And its BREEZE not BREEZY I don't understand why people keep calling the template that, people get the delusions that it is "easy breezy" to work with, well it isn't, it requires just as much effort as any other sprite template.
*sigh* Man, you need to work on your shading techniques, you gradient shade everything you make, that is a no-no, it is acceptable on certain things, but look at hair in real life, does it have a gradient effect? Or does it have strands, is multi colored, and sheen to it? You gotta get that down, it really detracts the quality of the sprite. When you use a palette you need to know how to use highlights, base tones, shades, and the outline.
As for the side view, it looks like he has an afro, like I said before, you need to work on volume and consistency, it needs to be toned down some, man if I had a friend and his hair looked like that, i'd tell him to tame the beast, cause that is just out of control.
Bottom frames, as said before, work with it, the bottom poses of hair don't tend to have a lot of extra detail, but you do need to make his hair move more, in all the frames.
It isn't a lost hope, just try to fix your stuff, because I would not ever take this to Breeze Revolution looking like this.
~Axerax
And please don't think I'm flaming your sprite, I'm giving you cynical comment and critique... If you don't like sarcasm, then I'm sorry, but that is how I C&C. And by the way, Charecter, is spelled wrong, it is spelled Character. And its BREEZE not BREEZY I don't understand why people keep calling the template that, people get the delusions that it is "easy breezy" to work with, well it isn't, it requires just as much effort as any other sprite template.
