my icons, taking requests for practice

[monkeydlu]

Taking requests on icons for practice, and please give some crit when you can, I didn't make icons before, but I figured I should as they don't take long and I need to do them well as well.

all I ask is don't request more than 3 at once, and try to be descriptive enough.

and I also much more want to make weapon icons, lol.

Favorite requests:

http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268 ... axe2-1.png[/img]http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268/monkeydlu/ne%20album/shoes-1.png[/img]http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268/monkeydlu/ne%20album/radio-1.png[/img]http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268/monkeydlu/ne%20album/pistol-1.png[/img]http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268/monkeydlu/ne%20album/peachdress-1.png[/img]http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268/monkeydlu/ne%20album/mag-1.png[/img]
http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268 ... nife-1.png[/img]http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268/monkeydlu/ne%20album/gasmask-1.png[/img]http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268/monkeydlu/ne%20album/fruitysword-1.png[/img]http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268/monkeydlu/ne%20album/flameaxe-1.png[/img]http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268/monkeydlu/ne%20album/firstaid-1.png[/img]http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268/monkeydlu/ne%20album/elegantsword-1.png[/img]
http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268 ... taff-1.png[/img]http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268/monkeydlu/ne%20album/dragonslayers-1.png[/img]http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268/monkeydlu/ne%20album/crudebow-1.png[/img]http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268/monkeydlu/ne%20album/clawknuckles-1.png[/img]
http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268 ... belt-1.png[/img]http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268/monkeydlu/ne%20album/bow2-1.png[/img]http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268/monkeydlu/ne%20album/bow-1.png[/img]http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268/monkeydlu/ne%20album/bearpaw-1.png[/img]http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268/monkeydlu/ne%20album/axe2-1.png[/img]http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268/monkeydlu/ne%20album/axe01-1.png[/img]
http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268 ... bows-1.png[/img]http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268/monkeydlu/ne%20album/DragonStaff-1.png[/img]http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268/monkeydlu/ne%20album/rustedsword.png[/img]http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268/monkeydlu/ne%20album/Dragonstaff2.png[/img]

 

[Tindy]

The sword looks all right, but the sandwiches look nothing like sammiches.  They look like origami sammiches.  Make them bigger, for one, and maye make them less boxy.  It looks like you're trying to put them at a dynamic angle, but it looks like you did the crust and then got tired.

 

[PhoenixTilea]

Hey, not bad!

I've got a couple of requests, if you don't mind!

1. A Unicorn Horn - Just a long, golden hor. I think most everyone knows what that looks like.
2. A Leather Sheild - A black leather sheild. I can't seem to find one anywhere! Nothing fancy; it's just supposed to be beginner armor
3. A Leather Choker - A black leather choker necklace thing (sort of like a collar) with a sapphire gem on the front of it. Just plain, a band with a gem on it.

I'd totally appreciate these! Like I said before, those up there look pretty good!

 

[monkeydlu]

yeah, I didn't like how it turned out :x

all I did here was change the bottom border color a bit and give it a black outline, I looked at the FE icons sheets a bit, and they all have black outlines, and I thought it was a neat style.

anyways, I think it looks better now XD

http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268 ... wich-1.png[/img]

edit-

And request taken XD

edit2-

done

http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268 ... onhorn.png[/img] http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268 ... shield.png[/img] http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268 ... Choker.png[/img]

 

[monkeydlu]

made a crude/wooden bow for another requester, feed back please :x

http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268 ... udebow.png[/imgzoom]

edit-

also, a large axe:

http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268 ... rgeAxe.png[/img]

 

[grimreaper1357]

Both of the bow icons looks great, I got two requests if you would be so kind:

1-A black bandanna with a white circle in the middle (trying to make it look like it has a skull in the middle)

2-A black cape with a white cross (you know the christian one) painted on the back.

EDIT: 3-Think you could make a bullet belt? Something that looks like this http://www.imosh.com/BULLETBELT/images/ ... 20BELT.jpg
I don't even know if this last one is possible, so if it looks too complicated then forget about it.

Hope that was descriptive enough :x, and good work so far.

 

[monkeydlu]

taken, check back in a hour and it should be done

 

[DJ]

If I give you crits I may say...

sword and axe = good
food and some clothes = ???what is this?? looks crazy.

 

[redwrath5]

I agre with DJ here. The shield uses 2 colors that's why its looks odd. The choker looks ok try removing the black in the center

 

[monkeydlu]

yeah, it turns out trying to make things look simple and plain is hard to make look good as well.

I didn't have much to go on for design :P

anyways, heres a elegant staff requested by a member of rpgm.org, which people should visit, as it's really a good place, lol

http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268 ... tstaff.png[/imgzoom]

 

[monkeydlu]

Grim, the request is done:

http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268 ... teband.png[/imgzoom] http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268 ... iccape.png[/IMGzoom] http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268 ... etbelt.png[/IMGzoom]

 

[grimreaper1357]

Nice, I'll definitely use these, thanks a bunch =)

 

[monkeydlu]

no prob, anyways, last one for the night I think

Can you make me the sword of seven souls? XD

Basically, it's a sword that's glowing seven colors

and the result!

http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268 ... ysword.png[/imgzoom]

lol, better name would be the sword of Tucan Sam (Idea by sithlord XD)

 

[monkeydlu]

some cross bow requests from a member of phanxgames:

http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268 ... ossbow.png[/IMGzoom] http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268 ... ssbows.png[/imgzoom]

 

[redwrath5]

your getting better i would recommended trying steel armor(body only)

 

[monkeydlu]

sure, is that a request?

What kind of armor? Other than steel, like, mail? Plated, samurai? Dragon? lol, idk, give me a picture to go with on this one. 

and it'll be better if it's a cool design, plain icons are hard to make look pretty, just compare the legendary crossbow to the plain corssbow XD

 

[redwrath5]

i would like it plane(no symbols) and plated

 

[monkeydlu]

yes, ignore me.

oh well, idk what plated really means, off to google, I'll just do what I want with this one then.

anyways, heres another request, a dragon Mage staff.

http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268 ... nStaff.png[/IMGzoom]

 

[eschar]

Hi, I need an icon of a bear's paw (bear is a medium brown color) for my game. Since you're looking for practice, I thought I'd ask for it.

I'm not fussy at all. I don't care if it has claws or not just that it looks paw-like.

Thank you in advance for any help. Your icons look very nice.

 

[monkeydlu]

here ya go

http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268 ... earpaw.png[/imgzoom]

edit-

and a... force field request, lol

http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268 ... efield.png[/imgzoom]

edit2-

with a bigger stickman XD

http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268 ... ield-1.png[/imgzoom]