My Drawing.

[MarcGraubra]

Here's two character from my game, Aelis and Dalia,

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Sorry for the shading, first time that I try this type of coloring.

 

[Ulqiorra]

These are very good, and oddly enough I like that dance. But you should do some anti-aliasing on the last two, they look a little jagged on the edges.

 

[MarcGraubra]

there are in Indexed colors, the pictures are less heavy, but the transparancy disapered.
the dance are "caramel dance"
Thanks for the comment !!!

 

[Ulqiorra]

I know, I just looked it up on youtube. funny stuff. So there's no transparency? Maybe you should add a background, or not index them?

 

[mawk]

basically the same advice I have for half the artists on this forum
1. first and foremost, study faces and anatomy. you're not as bad as some people I've seen when it comes to this, but it could still use some refining.
2. don't start drawing anime. you can do anime after you've learned about anatomy and the placement of facial features, but if you learn the basics from anime you're going to be crippled as an artist. that's already the case with too many artists on this site. don't let it happen to you too.

and one special
3. pay some more attention to the feet. I can definitely see you've been getting lazy at this point; feet aren't sausage rolls or cylinders, and people notice if you just kind of phone in part of your drawing.

unrelated:

this is the worst thing I've ever seen.

 

[Ulqiorra]

I know, but as I mentioned in another thread I am stuck with crappy flash art until I get my graphics tablet, after that I can make it look 16 times as good. I can't draw with the mouse pad dude!

But I agree, the faces have room for improvement, though they are pretty good...