KPhoenix's Artwork [Vehicle fin]

[miss matcha]

A newer piece, this is the lineart, see first post for it's colored version.
http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n225 ... rpinBW.png[/img]

I agree, this is very lovely.  The detail on the dress (all the ruffles and little wrinkles in the cloth) and hair are great.

 

[SakuraPhoenix]

Thanks miss Matcha ^^; It seems a lot of people enjoy my linework more than my color work lately.

 

[djzalzer]

It's because frankly, your linework looks much better than your painted-style work.  Your color work is superb, no doubt about it, but your lines have (in my opinion) a more delicate, profound, and detailed style that can't be beat.  Try coloring in your linework.

edit and whaddyaknow, I look on the front page of this topic, there's the colored lineart and it looks awesome!

 

[SakuraPhoenix]

It's because frankly, your linework looks much better than your painted-style work.  Your color work is superb, no doubt about it, but your lines have (in my opinion) a more delicate, profound, and detailed style that can't be beat.  Try coloring in your linework.

edit and whaddyaknow, I look on the front page of this topic, there's the colored lineart and it looks awesome!

Thanks and I guess I should post up moar of my color pen work ^^; Here's a link to one of my more recent ones

http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n225/Kiearaphoenix/aerialaquatic.png[/img]

Anywah, here's the princess so far, she's still WIP. I have to go back and tighten up the details, smooth out lines, etc. But first I want to see if anyone can see any errors anatomy or foreground/background wise.

Spoiler

http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n225/Kiearaphoenix/MarPrincessKP.png[/img]

 

[Venetia]

Definitely, your colored linework is really far superior to the colored work without lines. The ones without lines lack a lot of detail and definition which make your pieces more crisp and professional.

 

[SakuraPhoenix]

Thanks Venny for that point. I couldn't pin point what was lacking in my paintings 'till you mentioned that, so I've been practicing with more solid objects to make 'em more crisp.

Here's a WIP. I've not done final touch ups or the ensigna/markings but ya'll can tell what it is from right?

Ima goin' ol' skool. I haven't done a vehicle in ages >.>
http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n225 ... /Mach5.png[/img]

 

[Venetia]

:O!!!!!!!!!!

damn that is sweet ass

some of the outline of it looks a little .. eh, "squiggly" toward the bottom of the car, in the very front, under the leftmost headlight, but otherwise that's awesome :O

 

[ama55]

That mach 5 looks fantastic!  Almost real in some areas.  When scrolling down the page, i had to check twice.  Great work!

 

[djzalzer]

That is excellent!  I can't wait for the finished version.

 

[SakuraPhoenix]

Thankies all ^^

Here's the more finished product. What looks better as a background? The typical original red and yellow checkerboard or just the previous gradient black?

http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n225 ... Mach5a.png[/img]

 

[cactus]

I like the traditional yellow and red personally. It's old school!