Kingdom Hearts Advance

[Ibeatsephiroth]

                         Chapter 1 (World 1)

Spoiler: Intro to the game

Ok following my (or the other animators) movie, Shiro wakes  up in his bed(yes just like Roxas in kh2 ) he looks out the window...pretty bored of the scenery seeing day after day for (i guess he's 14?) for 14 years. Shiro heads outside to meet his freinds (this is optional) so-so, and so-so (can't think of everything  ) there talking about what there gonna do for there vacation seeing as it just started,(unless you decide shiro's by himslef he just starts to walk to get some excersize) while he/them are walking/talking Shiro feels a bit faint. Shiro"hey...does anyone else feel strange" (or if there's noone there) Shiro*...i feel...hollow today...* that's when he gets tripped by (to him nothing) the weakest of the Advancer race. (ouch...straight on the face...) he hits the ground so hard he get's nocked out...and that follows into him getting the keyblade in the wierd place with a picture of Sora on the ground and stuff. He's attacked by advancers in there

Spoiler: After the Keyblade/Day 1

When Shiro come's to he wakes up on the side walk were he fell. so-so,"Shiro are you alright?".
Shiro,"yeh....just peachy". so-so2,"way to lose your balance :tongue: ". Shiro,"yeh...yeh, so what are we gonna do about summer?", so-so" we couold get jobs :crazy: " so-so2"why? we could just enter the tournament being held in 4 days". Shiro" hey, yeh that sounds like fun". so-so"What's the prize if we win?". so-so2 "500,000 money!!!". Shiro" holy crap! :shock: , we so gotta enter and win." So-so2 "way ahead of you :shades: . Were already entered". then after this little talk they all head to the downtown Ramen shop. After that they all head home and that's the end of Day 1

Spoiler: Robbery/Day 2

Shiro wakes up again and heads out to the local Ramen shop, when he gets there he see's his two friends...and a cop. Shiro"what happened?" So-so" there was a robbery at are favorite ramen shop . All there money was stolen so they might need to close down..." Shiro,"that's horrible :sad: we gotta find the people who robbed them", so-so2" no duh...but we don't know were they went or who they are...", Shiro"why don't we ask around town to see if anyone saw anything...maybe someone saw something...", so-so2" well yeh we could, but it's very unblikely we'll find the people. And even if we do what couold we do?". Shiro" aww cmon, i bet we could take care of some 2-bit robbers :shades: ". so-so2", no you ediote we can't...". Shiro," sticks and stone
so-so, i'm gonna go look :tongue: ". After alot of looking, Shiro will finaly find someone that saw the break in but noone would belive him/her idk what gender. Anyway He/She says it was some ugly grey thing from a badly drawn cartoon. He/She saw the general direction on were it went and Shiro goes to find out who or what robbed the Ramen shop. Shiro find's Himself at an Abandoned Builed soon to be Condemed and torn down. He finds the Advancer and has to fight it off, the keybalde apears in his hand and he has no idea were it came from. As soon as the advancer is defeated the keblade dissapears and Shiro couldn't figure out what just happend... He found that the advancer had stolen a big sack of assorted stuff(books, money, diapers, a gun (jk), and some random junk).
He returns the stolen money to the Ramen shop and yehhh the ramen shop isn't closed :grin: .
After that Day 2 ends

all do day 3 later hope you like day 2 :lol:

Man, that's awesome... How does these Advancers look like? I could sprite them.

 

[XeKia]

Thank you i try my best when i write the story.
I'm not to sure though what they look like ask Karalim

 

[Meness]

XeKia you are awesome! I am lucky to have you working on the story! Once I'm done with the most common Advancers, I'll scan it and post it up.

Also,
I am currently making a forum for KHA, link will be up once I'm happy with it.

 

[XeKia]

thanks :shades: i try my best to write the storys

 

[shiroun]

Yo I just had an epiffany.


What if we take Roxas' world and make it Shiro's. Same world, but then Roxas comes at the struggle tournament?

 

[XeKia]

???wtf that make no sense what so ever....???

 

[shownomercy77]

Spoiler

hey i know maybe i criticise too much cuz everyone thinks it awesome but hey im just trying to help make this thing better and... i think that beggining's too much exactly like kingdom hearts 2. that ain't fine... the idea i had is, the main character's always a saint, chasing the bad guys and helping people and stuff, why dont we make shiro start as a bad guy, the thief himself? that way, he might grow along the story, learn how important it is to be good n stuff (disney style). their friends don't need to be like him some might say shiro why do you do that, or he doesnt tell hem, or there could be another wicked thief along his friends too. what do you think? you dont need to rewrite the whole story, you could just adapt it! and it aint too much anyway...

also instead of doing nice stuff anyay he could do bad stuff, like play pranks, but the advancers or whatever always show up for some reason. he can still participate in the tournament.

can i make some music or what? im bored!!!!!!

 

[Ninjitsu]

Any resources I have to submit?
Anything I have to do to be part of the "team?"

 

[XeKia]

Spoiler

hey i know maybe i criticise too much cuz everyone thinks it awesome but hey im just trying to help make this thing better and... i think that beggining's too much exactly like kingdom hearts 2. that ain't fine... the idea i had is, the main character's always a saint, chasing the bad guys and helping people and stuff, why dont we make shiro start as a bad guy, the thief himself? that way, he might grow along the story, learn how important it is to be good n stuff (disney style). their friends don't need to be like him some might say shiro why do you do that, or he doesnt tell hem, or there could be another wicked thief along his friends too. what do you think? you dont need to rewrite the whole story, you could just adapt it! and it aint too much anyway...

also instead of doing nice stuff anyay he could do bad stuff, like play pranks, but the advancers or whatever always show up for some reason. he can still participate in the tournament.

can i make some music or what? im bored!!!!!!

actualy that's not a bad idea at all!
i like it thanks for the suggestion. and yeh i kinda hated te fact that i couldn't find another way to start the story -.-

 

[Meness]

Ahh, I'll rewrite the story and merge it with shownomercy's.

can i make some music or what? im bored!!!!!!

Sure you can! If you want to make anything you like go ahead!
Oh yes, but I would prefer a little bit techno to the songs.

Any resources I have to submit?
Anything I have to do to be part of the "team?"

Hmmm.... you can sprite CoM style right? If you can, I'll come back to you with a Organization XII twist.

Spoiler

hey i know maybe i criticise too much cuz everyone thinks it awesome but hey im just trying to help make this thing better and... i think that beggining's too much exactly like kingdom hearts 2. that ain't fine... the idea i had is, the main character's always a saint, chasing the bad guys and helping people and stuff, why dont we make shiro start as a bad guy, the thief himself? that way, he might grow along the story, learn how important it is to be good n stuff (disney style). their friends don't need to be like him some might say shiro why do you do that, or he doesnt tell hem, or there could be another wicked thief along his friends too. what do you think? you dont need to rewrite the whole story, you could just adapt it! and it aint too much anyway...

also instead of doing nice stuff anyay he could do bad stuff, like play pranks, but the advancers or whatever always show up for some reason. he can still participate in the tournament.

can i make some music or what? im bored!!!!!!

actualy that's not a bad idea at all!
i like it thanks for the suggestion. and yeh i kinda hated te fact that i couldn't find another way to start the story -.-

So you want to rewrite it? You could work on day 3 or whatsoever and I would help you merge it.

 

[Ibeatsephiroth]

Hey ,kiralim. How do you think an advancer would look like? :huh:

 

[shiroun]

???wtf that make no sense what so ever....???

Play the game idiot. You'll see Axel come to the Struggle tourny.

 

[XeKia]

call me an ediote again and we'll have some flame problems...

they way you said it made little sense, this is becuase

ROXAS WENT BACK INTO S.O.R.A.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

...so unless sora (once agian -.-) somehow became a heartless or something stupid like that ROXAS CAN"T EVEN EXIST!!!. Because if roxas can exist then sora can't because roxas is HALF of sora.

Btw i beat 1-2 and the chain of memories all on Proud mode with only useing the kingdom key atleast 80% complete on all three so don't go tell me to play the freaking game...

 

[Skyla Doragono]

Hey, guys.  Can we have less spamming and flaming and more to do with the recruitment for this game?

 

[XeKia]

wow that was fast O.o
ok sorry i'm currently fighting off a cold. And really we got all the people we need (that's what i think anyway.) heck were already makeing the game.

 

[Ninjitsu]

CoM style translated to RMXP?
Example?
http://www.gsarchives.net/index2.php?ca ... evel1=sora
Would this be it?
If so, I can do it, but itll take FOREVER.

 

[Meness]

Hey ,kiralim. How do you think an advancer would look like? :huh:

Just wait, I'm almost done with the drawings.

???wtf that make no sense what so ever....???

Play the game idiot. You'll see Axel come to the Struggle tourny.

call me an ediote again and we'll have some flame problems...

they way you said it made little sense, this is becuase

ROXAS WENT BACK INTO S.O.R.A.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

...so unless sora (once agian -.-) somehow became a heartless or something stupid like that ROXAS CAN"T EVEN EXIST!!!. Because if roxas can exist then sora can't because roxas is HALF of sora.

Btw i beat 1-2 and the chain of memories all on Proud mode with only useing the kingdom key atleast 80% complete on all three so don't go tell me to play the freaking game...

Woah, no flaming against each other please. What XeKia said was right, Roxas went back to Sora, but I have a world where you can see the nobodies. Current name for it is The Other Side.

wow that was fast O.o
ok sorry i'm currently fighting off a cold. And really we got all the people we need (that's what i think anyway.) heck were already makeing the game.

Actually no, we could still use a few more team members. And hope you get well with your cold soon.

CoM style translated to RMXP?
Example?
http://www.gsarchives.net/index2.php?ca ... evel1=sora
Would this be it?
If so, I can do it, but itll take FOREVER.

Hmmmm, what else you said you were good at again?

EDIT:
Done with the Roxas' Station Of Calling tileset.
http://i125.photobucket.com/albums/p66/ ... reenie.png[/img]
I know that it's not fully cleaned yet. I'm lazy right now.

 

[Ninjitsu]

Well, Thats the style you want?
Your sprites are normal RMXP though, with 16 per sheet right?
Thats the type I do.
The link i posted is massive and crazy, i was just hoping you didnt want THAT kind of sprite.

 

[Meness]

Yeap, I want that style, and no, I won't need such a massive sprite sheet!

 

[shownomercy77]

i'm not very inspired right now to make really good music. i was just bored the other day. but if u need me to make a music that doesnt have to be really cool (for some place or world) just tell me. those musics dont have to be really good, they just have to fit the environment and make people feel what the space should make people feel. so they're easier to do and much better for now, as i'm not inspired.