Half Kaizer work (need some advice on it)

[coyotecraft]

The hair is looking good. It just needs a few more pixels to flesh it out.

For shiny pieces like the shoulder pad and breastplate build up your value from dark to light. I like to place the highlights along the edges. Think how a blade would have that shimmer along the edge.
I'm not really sure what you were doing with the rest of the breastplate so I left it alone.

I've never done a straw hat before. Since straw hats have a weave pattern I think you should stick to a checkerboard pattern then actual lines. Also you may want to reselect your color palette. You're using way to many colors and they were hard to work with.

http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r134 ... nybits.png[/IMGzoom]

 

[burningstar2000]

So is this better?
http://i510.photobucket.com/albums/s347 ... hnaged.png[/imgzoom]

And is the guys hair i posted earlier is it good is it done?

 

[Dark_Cover]

you should add some shading to his for-head where his hair covers the light. and the pads on his pnats look strange, dont know why but they look out of place