I like your orchestral stuff - the intro in particular. As for constructive criticism, I think in the intro, there were a few places where your plucked string melody seemed a bit off key, I think it's at 0:26, possibly because it might be 2 strings being plucked and one of them may be off. Also, I think that you may want to look into manipulating volume a bit on each instrument, such as in The Calm, The Battle, The End, where the strings seemed to stop a bit too fast in my opinion (nothing wrong with stopping fast, but to me a bit of a resonating fade might sound better, particularly on strings). You're on the right track though, keep at it!