Okay here are the pages from my how to draw book.
Eye Drawing Tips *This will be deleted in 2 Days so pic it up ASAP*
They are pages fron "More How to Draw Manga VOL1" and "Techniques for Drawing Female Mange Characters".
Also a reference for hair shadowing.
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That should help abit. I recomend actually buying the dow to draw books if you need them. They're quite usefull.
Also a tip:
If you draw much better on paper then why not scan the pic or use a digital camera and then upload the pic on your computer. From there you could just use photoshop. Just make a new layer and retrace useing your mouse. If you have a tablet then use that.
That's what I do with my pics since i'm not use too drawing directly on the computer yet. Even with a tablet I can't get use to it.