DOJ Ghost Ship

[|3_32]

I'm getting really annoyed with this damn boats arse!  I think I've got an idea though, I'll chuck a rear loading hatch on it, changes the way I'll have to rig the crane, but its doable.

http://i298.photobucket.com/albums/mm26 ... opy_01.png[/img]

 

[The Data Mage]

Im still liking this but i would still suggest angling those propeller rigs down a little... Want me to mess with a line see if i can suggest a hull shape?

A major problem you might be having is that the horizontal tiles (deck etc) are the the same shade and coloring as the verticals (walls etc)... I would suggest lightening up the walls to give some contrast.

If you'd prefer some real-time feed back, I'm always on msn ^_^

 

[badmonur]

For me your pallet is just really flat and bland. Almost non existent. Everything sort of meshes to gether and its hard to see anything unless you kinda squint.

 

[RavenTDA]

maybe it's my monitor but I feel like it's kinda dark. I mean it's okay in itself but compared to your other stuff going with it, the wood is too dark. Like the metal and the sign is too differnt. The sign especially pops in a not so good way. I'd just lighten the colors and add a bit of contrast overall on the ship.

 

[|3_32]

Grah! Damnable arse, I think I'm more of a boobs man, this arse just ain't working right.  What I don't understand is how everyones monitors can be so bloody dark, when mine shows it as a dull grey ... :/

Spoiler: Damn Arse

http://i298.photobucket.com/albums/mm261/Studio32_bucket/DOJ%20Tilesets/tilesetAirBoatcopy_02.png[/img]

 

[badmonur]

Its not our monitors its your pallet, its really dark and muddy. I mean don't get me wrong, your line work is superb but the pallet is basiclly two toned and not popping out at all.

Edit: I did some work on your pallet.  If you want to know how I did it just ask

http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f251/ ... opy_01.png[/img]

 

[The Data Mage]

I like the new version bad. I wonder what it would look like with the effects over it...

 

[badmonur]

What do you mean different effects.
I duplicated the layer about 5 times and drop all the alphas down to 25% except for the bottom one. On the first i messed around with the Hue to get the brownish color, on the second i messed around with the color balance to get some purples in there, on the third i messed around with the contrast and brightness to get more solid shadows and highlights, the fourth one I messed around with the Highlights and shadows tool to further the effect and the last one I used the exposure tool*. Thats basically how I did it.

 

[The Data Mage]

By effects i meant: Screen tone, fogs, weather effects etc. Anything that will effect the tileset in game.

 

[Emdejszyn]

every photobucket links are broken ;\

 

[Ellie]

Looks like |3_32 deleted everything in that folder: http://s298.photobucket.com/albums/mm26 ... 0Tilesets/

(Off topic: You stole shadow's avatar... you make me sad )