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Dark Chaos- This is my first VX Game!

What needs the most improvement?

  • The Story

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • The Heroes

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • The Villains

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • The Rebels

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • The Supporting Cast

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • who gives a shit

    Votes: 2 100.0%

  • Total voters
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││█║▌│║▌║ ▌│║▌║ ▌││":3vqkbc31 said:
Who the fuck do you think you are? This is my project, NOT YOURS. I don't have to take your advice. I don't have to agree with your opinions. Stop spamming my fucking topic with the same complaints. I HAVE READ YOUR SAME ASS BITCHING COMPLAINTS OVER AND OVER AGAIN.

I don't care if someone dislikes my game. I can't please everyone. However you act as if you are in control of my project. You have been demanding.
Hey uhh, if you're gonna be like that dude why bother posting a project thread? People are going to say shit about your game, sometimes it is good, sometimes it is bad. Deal with it. You can't really expect to make a project thread and not have anyone give out some advice. But you're the same as a lot of other people dude, someone gives out advice and you do the whole "I DONT NEED TO TAKE YOUR ADVICE IT IS MY GAME" basically you're raging because you can't take crits on your game, news flash man, people are going to criticize your game, it's kind of a point when you post a project thread.


I don't have a problem with people giving me criticism. I know I can not please everyone. However Lumar continues to complain about the same things. I don't have to agree with his opinions. He is spamming my topic by continually making the same complaints. This is my game, and I will make it my way. He acts if this is his game project, and demanding me to make changes.

Then maybe take peoples advice and improve it so they don't complain?
It is one thing to give criticism, but it is another to bitch about someone's project. If you don't like someone project then tell them. However, do not continually bitch at the person for not taking your advice.
 

mawk

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I don't have a problem with people giving me criticism
from what I've seen here, you obviously do. you just label any negative criticism that doesn't hold itself back with treacle sweetness as "bitching" and then throw a complete tantrum about it

seriously, bro. I don't think I've seen such awful conduct in someone's own project thread for a while. it's not making your game attractive to the public, showing that the person who made it acts like a six-year-old whenever he doesn't get praise.

these people are your prospective audience

being a crybaby will understandably make you less appealing as a developer

if you can't handle that, find somewhere else.
 

mawk

Sponsor

p.s. if you've been hearing the

SAME ASS BITCHING COMPLAINTS OVER AND OVER AGAIN
then maybe that's a signal that those are legitimate points you need to improve on and you should stop treating this like an inquisition
 
I am not acting like a six year old. I am upset that this person continues to spam my topic. I know not everyone will enjoy my project. I told this person time and time again that I do NOT want his help. How many times should I tell him? How many times should I have to tell him to this is how I will make things? I am not telling him, hey you are wrong. He has a right to his opinion. What I am saying is I heard his complaints a lot in this topic. They are basically the same complaints in all of his posts. I already said I will do not make it his way. He may not like my game, but at least show respect that this is how I will do it. He may not like how I make my games, but he should not try to force his way of making games on me. This is my game, not his.
 

mawk

Sponsor

so if you're just going to summarily ignore legitimate critique by saying "yeah all the terrible dialogue and mapping is intentional" why do you even have a topic here in PD
 
Alrighty, looked through it, but I didn't read the rest of the thread, so don't shoot me if I'm repeating things here.

Firstly, your main character seems a little emo, I don't know about other people, but I happen to hate main characters who are feeling emo about themselves, kinda of makes me want to kick them in the head.

Next up is your maps, a few of the links appear to be broken or you deleted the images. Either or. So, all I saw was a Menu Shot, and some castle roof looking place, which seemed a bit too open, try closing it in a bit is what I'd suggest.

Third, reading the story, character biographies and nation descriptions, some of it feels stale, and like a robot is talking. Now, I'm not sure how my writing is, but I for one find it hard to read descriptions like that, as they feel incredibly boring, even if they're immensely fun sounding. So, add some personality to you writing I guess.

Your classes seem somewhat limited to me, and the Dark Knight feels overpowered. His only weakness is he cant use Light Magic? That's not really much of a weakness, more of a restriction. More of a weakness is, he has strong physical attacks, and can use Dark Magic, but because he's a Physical Class he can only use the Low Level Dark Magic, and assuming he wears Heavy Armor, he'd have a bit below the normal Speed.

Anyways, those are a few of my nit-picks. Other then that it doesn't sound half bad and I wish you luck. :)
 
dr. goodlife":2eqps03y said:
so if you're just going to summarily ignore legitimate critique by saying "yeah all the terrible dialogue and mapping is intentional" why do you even have a topic here in PD

I posted my topic here to get comments. I know I have received a few good, and mostly bad comments for my game. That does not mean I have to agree with his opinions. He stated his opinion already. However, he is going to far by spamming my topic. He is forcing his opinions on me as if this is his project. I never asked him for help. I already told him NO, but he continues to spam my topic. If you want to give someone a critique that is fine, but continually want a game to be the way you like games is going to far. Not everyone will make a game the way you like it. If someone says he or she is not going to do it your way then just move on to the next game. Why continually to make the same complaints when the person already said he or she will not make it your way?
 

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