Comment my scrap...

[linkz0r]

Hmm... Plz comment my wip... I´m not so confident on it yet, and i know that there´re some things that could be changed, i´m just not sure on what...

Post in DA or here, you choose. I´ll reply the two. I just want some opinions on it before i go inking it. Plz read the scrap comments for more information ^^

P.S.: I just discovered that scraps in DA doesn´t have any value for the members... ^_^

 

[Mr.Mo]

I don't see anything wrong with it, I think its well done but I'm no critic.

 

[linkz0r]

Hmm... Maybe... but I´m asking in an aestethic point of view ^^ If there´s something that could make her presentation better.

 

[DESIRE]

At this point I really can't tell if there's anything that could be changed about the presentation as I suppose you could really go different ways with presentation when coloring it. It looks pretty good now, though.

 

[linkz0r]

Sure, i´ll try my best to improve the drawing when coloring... In this type of art the coloring is more important, it has a great visual impact. But i was with several doubts in the wings and in the eyes behind her (that were supposed to be like her face... xD)

 

[Colormagix]

Ok i think that the overal design is good. i think it would look really good if instead of just eyes you add her whole face so it will have the look your going for. Nice drawing i just love those wings. All things that have wings just make wish i had them. then i would be loneFlight lol

Keep up the good work LinkinT

 

[linkz0r]

hehehe thx sir ^^